List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct minor grammar errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and filler phrases.

Exemplo: Yes — I always make a shopping list before I go out because I tend to forget items. For example, I normally write down essentials like milk and bread and check the list before leaving the house.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer and avoid contradictory or unclear statements. Remove fillers (um, uh) and explain briefly why lists don’t work for you, then state whether you plan to change that habit. Use linking words to make it coherent.

Exemplo: No, I don't usually make lists for work because I struggle to keep a consistent routine. Consequently, lists often become irrelevant to me; however, I plan to try digital task managers so that I can stay organised.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence, then give specific reasons and an example. Use linking words (for example, because, therefore) and correct small grammar issues (e.g., 'making lists', 'keep track of them').

Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it wastes time and they cannot keep track of their lists. For example, if someone frequently loses paper lists, they may prefer relying on memory instead.

Sugestão: Answer directly and correct register (avoid 'phone addict'). Give one or two specific advantages of phone lists with a linking word. Keep it concise and grammatically correct.

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me and I can set reminders. Therefore, using the phone Notes app helps me avoid losing lists and keeps everything organised.

× Yes, absolutely. In fact it is the first thing I do before I go out for a shopping as I have an I have a tendency of forgetting things.

✓ Yes, absolutely. In fact, it is the first thing I do before I go out shopping, as I have a tendency to forget things.

Using 'a shopping' is incorrect because 'shopping' is an uncountable gerund here and does not take an article. 'I have an I have' is a repetition error; remove the duplicate. 'Forgetting things' is better expressed as 'to forget things' (infinitive) or 'forget things' after 'tendency to'. Include commas to improve clarity.

× Umm, honestly, I don't make a list for work because uh, I can't maintain a specific time or routine.

✓ Umm, honestly, I don't make a list for work because I can't maintain a specific time or routine.

The sentence contains filler 'uh' which is spoken but not a grammatical error; remove extraneous filler for clarity. The tense is correct (present simple) to express a habitual inability; keep present simple. No structural change except removing filler words.

× Umm, I would say it's a really bad habit of mine, but I guess I should work on it.

✓ Umm, I would say it's a bad habit of mine, but I guess I should work on it.

'A really bad habit' is acceptable colloquially but 'really' is an adverb and optional; removing it tightens the sentence. Structure is otherwise correct: present modal 'would' and 'should'. This adjustment is stylistic rather than strictly grammatical.

× So I think it works like, uh, magically so.

✓ So I think it works like magic.

'Works like magically' is ungrammatical because 'magically' is an adverb; the idiomatic expression is 'works like magic' (noun). Remove filler 'uh' and the redundant 'so' at the end.

× I think it depends on them 'cause as some people think that making list is just a waste of time because they can't keep track on it.

✓ I think it depends on the person, because some people think that making a list is just a waste of time since they can't keep track of it.

'Depends on them' is vague; 'depends on the person' is clearer. 'Making list' needs the article 'a list'. Use 'since' or 'because' for reason; use 'keep track of' not 'keep track on'. Avoid informal 'cause' and 'as' used together; use one conjunction.

× I think mostly that's why people really don't like making lists.

✓ I think that's mostly why people don't like making lists.

Word order and adverb placement improved: move 'mostly' before 'why' or after 'that's' and remove redundant 'really'. The plural 'lists' is correct; change is stylistic for natural word order.

× As I'm a really phone addict so I would prefer making a list on my phone rather than on paper or notebook because I would eventually forget where I wrote the list on.

✓ Since I'm really addicted to my phone, I would prefer making a list on my phone rather than on paper or in a notebook, because I might eventually forget where I wrote the list.

Use 'addicted to' not 'phone addict' in this structure. Remove redundant 'so' when starting sentence with 'As' or 'Since'. Use 'in a notebook' not 'on paper or notebook'. Avoid ending with 'where I wrote the list on' — use 'where I wrote the list' or 'what I wrote the list on' (but the former is preferred). 'Might' is a better modal here than 'would' for possibility.

× So I think making list on my phone notes would be easier for me to follow it.

✓ So I think making a list in my phone notes would be easier for me to follow.

'Making list' needs the article 'a list'. Use 'in my phone notes' instead of 'on my phone notes'. Remove the redundant object 'it' after 'follow' — follow what is implied (the list).