List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No), then give one or two specific details. Avoid filler sounds and grammatical errors (use present simple: “I make a list,” “I list the things I need”). Use linking words like “because” to connect reasons.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list. I find it helps me remember essentials and avoid buying unnecessary items because I write down specific things I need for my home, such as milk, rice and cleaning supplies.

Sugestão: Answer directly and clarify status first. Say you are a student, then hypothetically answer about work lists. Use simple conditional phrasing correctly (If I worked, I would...). Avoid repeating fillers and incorrect collocations like “working correctly.”

Exemplo: I’m actually a student, so I don’t make lists for a job. However, if I had a job, I would make daily to-do lists because they would help me prioritize tasks and check off completed items.

Sugestão: Provide a clear opinion with specific reasons and examples. Use accurate grammar (e.g., “making lists is difficult” not “quite a bit difficult”). Link your ideas with connectors like “because” or “for example.” Avoid irrelevant or unclear metaphors (the phrase about eating is confusing).

Exemplo: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and restrictive. For example, people who prefer spontaneity may feel a list limits their choices, and others may forget to update the list and get frustrated.

Sugestão: Good clear preference and reason; improve accuracy and concision. Use correct verb tenses and phrasing (e.g., “I prefer to make lists on my phone because it’s easy to edit mistakes. If I wrote them on paper, I might have to rewrite the list”). Add a brief example of an app or feature to show specificity.

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it’s easy to edit and reorder items. For instance, I use a notes app where I can tick off bought items and move priorities without rewriting the whole list.

× And when I'm going to shopping, I always listed things what I need to the home.

✓ And when I go shopping, I always list the things I need for the home.

The original sentence has several issues: incorrect verb tense and form ('I'm going to shopping' should be 'I go shopping' — use 'go' + activity without 'to'); past tense 'listed' conflicts with present habit, so use simple present 'list'; incorrect relative clause 'things what I need' should be 'things I need' or 'things that I need'; incorrect preposition 'to the home' should be 'for the home' or 'for my home'. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions, remove unnecessary 'to', and use correct relative clause.

× That's the interesting questions, but I'm not working correctly.

✓ That's an interesting question, but I'm not working at the moment.

Problems: plural 'questions' mismatches 'That's' (singular) and article missing before 'interesting' (should be 'an interesting question'); 'not working correctly' is unclear and likely intended to mean 'not currently working' so use 'at the moment' or 'right now'. Suggestion: match singular/plural, include appropriate article, and clarify phrase for current employment status.

× I'm a student, but uh, if I worked, uh, I think, uh, I would make a list and of course it would be work.

✓ I'm a student, but if I worked, I think I would make a list and of course it would be useful.

The sentence mixes tenses and has a wrong noun at the end: 'it would be work' is unnatural; likely intended meaning is 'it would be useful' or 'it would work'. The conditional 'if I worked... I would make' is fine for a hypothetical. Suggestion: replace 'work' with 'useful' or 'helpful' or 'work' intransitively as 'it would work'. Remove filler 'uh' and extra commas.

× In my opinion, uh making lists quite a bit difficult for people.

✓ In my opinion, making lists is quite difficult for some people.

Missing verb 'is' after subject 'making lists'; awkward adverb placement 'quite a bit difficult' should be 'quite difficult' or 'a bit difficult'; 'for people' better as 'for some people' to sound natural. Suggestion: include the linking verb and choose a natural adverbial phrase.

× That's why I think they don't want to make A to do list, but if they had to eat they feel more comfortable.

✓ That's why I think they don't want to make a to-do list, but if they had to, they would feel more comfortable.

Several issues: capitalization and hyphenation of 'A to do list' should be 'a to-do list'; 'had to eat' appears unrelated—likely intended 'had to' (had to make one) or 'had to shop/eat' is unclear. Also tense consistency: 'if they had to, they would feel' uses correct conditional. Use 'would feel' for hypothetical result. Suggestion: clarify intended meaning (e.g., 'if they had to, they would feel more comfortable') and use correct article and hyphenation.

× Actually I prefer to make list on a phone because when I get some mistakes I can correct them easily, but if I wrote them on paper I had to ruin the whole list and start it again.

✓ Actually, I prefer to make lists on my phone because when I make mistakes I can correct them easily, but if I wrote them on paper I would have to erase the whole list and start again.

Problems: 'make list' should be plural 'make lists' or 'make a list'; 'on a phone' is better as 'on my phone' (specific device); 'when I get some mistakes' should be 'when I make mistakes'; conditional tense after 'if I wrote them on paper' should use 'I would have to' not past simple 'I had to'; 'ruin the whole list' is awkward for editing—use 'erase' or 'cross out' or 'start again'. Suggestion: use correct collocations (make mistakes), possessive for personal device, and proper conditional structure (would have to).