Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
No, I don't use to making a list when I'm shopping. I like to go shopping, buy things as casual as I can. For example, if I say something beautiful I and its price is appropriate, I will buy it.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes, because there are too many tasks, so I will make a list to help me remember all the tasks. I think making a list is really helpful. I can do the things one by one. It's organizal.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
I think the partial reason is that people think making a list is wasting time. They have good memories, so they don't need to make a list. They can do things one by one in their memories.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I prefer making a list in paper because I'm a handwriter lover. I like traditional things and I like when I'm writing. I like the feel of writing.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Pontuação: 68.0Sugestão: 在回答时注意语法和句子流畅性,避免冗长和重复;先直接回答问题,然后用一两句具体细节支持观点。可以改进动词时态和短语(例如 'used to' 和 'as casually as I can'),并修正人称与结构错误。
Exemplo: No, I don't usually make a shopping list. I prefer to shop spontaneously because I enjoy browsing. For example, if I see something attractive at a reasonable price, I often decide to buy it on the spot.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Pontuação: 74.0Sugestão: 回答要更凝练并用更准确的词汇;先直接回答(Yes),然后给出具体说明和效果。注意词汇拼写和选择(organize/organized);可以加上短时间、优先级等细节使回答更具体。
Exemplo: Yes, I always make a work list because I have many tasks. It helps me remember everything and complete tasks one by one. I usually prioritize items by deadline so I can stay organized and efficient.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Pontuação: 72.0Sugestão: 回答要更自然并使用连接词使逻辑清晰;避免字面直译如 'partial reason',用更地道表达如 'one reason'。加入更多具体原因或例子(性格、习惯、相信记忆更可靠)会更有说服力。
Exemplo: One reason is that some people find list-making time-consuming and unnecessary. They trust their memory or prefer a flexible, spontaneous approach. For example, someone with a good short-term memory might feel a list slows them down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Pontuação: 76.0Sugestão: 先直接回答并用更自然的表达说明原因,避免生硬或不地道的短语(handwriter lover)。可以补充一两个具体优点(例如记忆更好、方便标注),并用连接词增强连贯性。
Exemplo: I prefer making lists on paper because I enjoy handwriting and the tactile feel of pen on paper. It also helps me remember tasks better, and I can quickly tick items off or add notes by hand.
× No, I don't use to making a list when I'm shopping.
✓ No, I'm not used to making a list when I'm shopping.
问题类型:6(现在时问题)和8(动词 + -ing 形式)/12(代词或结构使用)组合。原句“You don't use to making”结构不正确。正确表达应为“be used to + 动名词”表示习惯。建议记住固定结构:be used to + V-ing 表示习惯于。
× I like to go shopping, buy things as casual as I can.
✓ I like to go shopping and buy things as casually as I can.
问题类型:8(动词 + -ing 形式/动名词)和13(副词/形容词使用错误)。原句缺少连词,且“casual”应为副词“casually”修饰动词“buy”。建议在连并两个动作时使用连词(and)或并列不定式,并使用副词修饰动词。
× For example, if I say something beautiful I and its price is appropriate, I will buy it.
✓ For example, if I see something beautiful and its price is appropriate, I will buy it.
问题类型:27(句子结构错误)和6(现在时问题)。原句中“I and its price is appropriate”语序和主语错误,应为“if I see something... and its price is appropriate”。建议使用正确的从句结构:if + 主语 + 动词。
× Yes, because there are too many tasks, so I will make a list to help me remember all the tasks.
✓ Yes, because there are too many tasks, so I make a list to help me remember them.
问题类型:6(现在时问题)。上下文是习惯性动作,用一般现在时更合适而非将来时“will”。另外可用代词“them”代替重复名词。建议根据习惯性或经常发生的动作使用一般现在时。
× I think making a list is really helpful.
✓ I think making a list is really helpful.
此句语法正确,无需修改。问题类型:无。保持原句。
× I can do the things one by one.
✓ I can do the tasks one by one.
问题类型:6(现在时/用词选择)。原句中“the things”不够具体,改为“the tasks”更符合上下文。建议使用语境合适的名词以提高表达准确性。
× It's organizal.
✓ It's organized.
问题类型:26(句子结构/拼写错误)。“organizal”为拼写错误且非英语单词,应为“organized”表示“有条理的”。建议注意正确拼写并使用常见形容词。
× I think the partial reason is that people think making a list is wasting time.
✓ I think a partial reason is that people think making a list is a waste of time.
问题类型:26(句子结构错误)和13(形容词/副词使用)。“is wasting time”不如名词短语“is a waste of time”自然。建议用固定表达“a waste of time”。
× They have good memories, so they don't need to make a list.
✓ They have good memories, so they don't need to make a list.
此句语法正确,无需修改。问题类型:无。保持原句。
× They can do things one by one in their memories.
✓ They can remember and do things one by one.
问题类型:6(现在时问题/表达不自然)。原句“in their memories”表达冗长且不自然,改为“remember and do”更加简洁自然。建议用更符合英语习惯的表达来描述记忆与执行。
× I prefer making a list in paper because I'm a handwriter lover.
✓ I prefer making a list on paper because I'm a handwriting lover.
问题类型:11(介词使用错误)和13(形容词/名词使用错误)。介词应为“on paper”而不是“in paper”。“handwriter lover”不合适,改为“handwriting lover”或更自然的“someone who prefers handwriting”。建议记住固定搭配“on paper”,并使用正确名词形式。
× I like traditional things and I like when I'm writing.
✓ I like traditional things and I like writing.
问题类型:13(副词/形容词使用不当)和26(句子结构)。原句“I like when I'm writing”不自然,直接用动名词“writing”更地道。建议使用动名词表达喜欢某一活动。
× I like the feel of writing.
✓ I like the feel of writing.
此句语法正确,无需修改。问题类型:无。保持原句。