List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar and clarity: start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then give one or two concise supporting details. Use correct verb forms and simpler vocabulary where needed. For coherence, use a linking phrase (e.g. "however" or "but"). Keep to no more than 4–5 short sentences.

Exemplo: I sometimes make a shopping list when the items are important or easy to forget. For example, if I need ingredients for a planned recipe, I write them down so I don't miss anything. However, for small or routine trips I usually don't bother with a list.

Sugestão: Clarify and correct grammar: answer directly, explain how you use lists, and evaluate effectiveness with a reason. Use linking words like "because" and "so" correctly and keep sentences concise. Replace vague phrases with specifics (e.g. "deadlines","reminders").

Exemplo: Yes, I always make lists for work because I have many deadlines to track. I use a to‑do app on my phone, which helps me organize tasks and set reminders. It usually works well, although sometimes I still forget to check the app when I'm busy.

Sugestão: Make the idea clearer and more natural: begin with a direct opinion, then give specific reasons and an example. Use correct collocations (e.g. "puts a lot of pressure on them") and linking words like "because" and "for example" to connect points.

Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because it puts a lot of pressure on them. For example, seeing many unfinished tasks can increase stress and make them feel like they are failing. Also, some prefer a more flexible approach and find lists too restrictive.

Sugestão: Answer directly and fix common errors: state your preference clearly, give two concise reasons with correct expressions (e.g. "everywhere" instead of "every wheel"), and include a short example. Avoid incomplete sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it and it's easy to update items. For instance, I can tick off tasks as I finish them and set reminders, which helps me stay organized throughout the day.

× It depends out was subject I thought if The Sims I want to buy is very necessary, so I would like to make a list in order to not forget it.

✓ It depends on what subject I thought; if the items I want to buy are necessary, I would make a list so I don't forget them.

The original sentence has multiple structural issues: wrong word order ('depends out was subject'), misuse of 'The Sims' (probably 'the items'), incorrect tense and agreement ('is' should be 'are' for plural 'items'), and awkward phrasing ('in order to not forget it'). Suggest breaking into clearer clauses, use 'depends on' + object, use 'items' for shopping objects, match plural noun and verb, and use 'so I don't forget them' for natural negative purpose phrasing.

× But some most of the time I didn't make the list.

✓ But most of the time I didn't make a list.

The phrase 'some most of the time' is ungrammatical and redundant. Use 'most of the time' for a habitual past frequency. Also use the indefinite article 'a' before 'list'. Keep past tense 'didn't make' which fits the intended meaning.

× Definitely, I always make least when I was working because I need to remember a lot of deadlines.

✓ Definitely, I always made lists when I was working because I needed to remember a lot of deadlines.

Tense consistency error: the student mixes present ('always make') with past time reference ('when I was working'). Change to past tense 'made' and 'needed'. Also 'make least' is incorrect; use 'made lists' (plural) to indicate repeated action.

× So make a list on the cell phone help me a lot but it doesn't work often.

✓ So making a list on my cell phone helped me a lot, but it did not always work.

Article and noun choice: 'the cell phone' should be 'my cell phone' for possession. Also grammatical form: use gerund 'making' as the subject, and tense consistency in past if referring to past work. 'Help' must agree with singular gerund so 'helped'. 'It doesn't work often' conflicts with past; change to 'did not always work' or keep present 'doesn't always work' if speaking generally.

× Maybe because it is put of a lot of pressure on them.

✓ Maybe because it puts a lot of pressure on them.

Wrong passive phrasing and preposition 'put of'. Use active verb 'puts' and correct preposition 'on' for pressure. Also use present tense 'puts' for general statement.

× Making a list is like making an alarm that someone.

✓ Making a list is like setting an alarm for someone.

The verb choice is wrong: 'making an alarm' is less natural than 'setting an alarm'. The preposition 'for someone' clarifies whom the alarm is for. Also original leaves sentence incomplete; corrected version completes the idea.

× People tend to be stressed when they find that their lists are not accomplished.

✓ People tend to feel stressed when they find that their lists are not completed.

Use 'feel stressed' for natural phrasing; 'not accomplished' is awkward—'not completed' or 'unfinished' is preferable. Tense and aspect are fine; adjustment improves register and clarity.

× I prefer making lists on my phone because I carry my phone to every wheel and it is more convenient for me to check if I have a. Finish any tasks and it is possible I.

✓ I prefer making lists on my phone because I carry it everywhere, and it is more convenient for me to check whether I have finished any tasks.

Multiple errors: 'carry my phone to every wheel' is incorrect — use 'carry it everywhere'; remove redundant repetition of 'phone'. 'Check if I have a. Finish any tasks and it is possible I' is fragmented and ungrammatical; combine into 'check whether I have finished any tasks'. This fixes preposition and adverb usage and completes the sentence.