List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Reduce hesitation and redundancy, use a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Keep answers natural and under five sentences. Focus on correct grammar for phrases like "I make a list" and avoid repeating filler sounds ("uh", "I, I, I").

Exemplo: Yes. I usually make a list before I go shopping. For example, for groceries I write down essentials like milk, rice and vegetables so I don't forget anything, and for clothes I note the items and sizes I need. This saves time and prevents impulse buys.

Sugestão: Make the response more concise and grammatically correct: start with a direct topic sentence, then give a specific example of how lists help at work. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to show cause and effect. Avoid awkward phrases such as "documents that I've been handled to me".

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a work list because it helps me organize tasks. For instance, I break a project into steps and note deadlines so I can prioritize tasks and hand completed documents to developers on time.

Sugestão: Give a clear main idea and two coherent, specific reasons using linking words (e.g., "for example", "because", "also"). Correct grammar: say "take a list" → "make a list" and avoid vague phrasing like "it's not available to".

Exemplo: I think some people avoid lists because they feel overwhelmed by planning and prefer to rely on memory. Also, making lists can seem time-consuming, and some people simply don't carry a notebook or don't want to use their phone for that.

Sugestão: Start with a direct preference sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Remove filler words and tighten grammar (e.g., "phones I have it" → "I have my phone with me"). Keep it within three sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me. For example, it's easier to add items quickly and I can sync lists across devices, whereas paper notes are easy to lose.

× Yes, this is what I do whenever I'm going to, uh, shopping center nearby.

✓ Yes, this is what I do whenever I'm going to the nearby shopping center.

Missing definite article before a specific noun phrase and incorrect word order. Use 'the nearby shopping center' to refer to a specific place. Also move 'nearby' before the noun for natural word order.

× For example, if I have to get some groceries, then I, I, I make some list of the things that I want to buy beforehand so that I don't get confused when entering the supermarket.

✓ For example, if I have to get some groceries, I make a list of the things that I want to buy beforehand so that I don't get confused when I enter the supermarket.

Use the indefinite article 'a' with singular countable noun 'list'. Remove redundant fillers and match clause tense and structure: use 'when I enter the supermarket' (present simple) rather than 'when entering' for clarity.

× And even when buying clothes, I do make list of what am I going to buy.

✓ And even when buying clothes, I do make a list of what I am going to buy.

Word order in embedded question is incorrect; use statement order 'what I am going to buy'. Also add the article 'a' before 'list'.

× Yeah, I always make list of my work like I make some plannings on how am I going to execute this certain task or documents that I've been handled to me so that I can give the best results to my developers whenever I'm working on projects.

✓ Yeah, I always make a list of my work; for example, I make plans on how I am going to execute a certain task or handle documents that have been given to me so that I can give the best results to my developers when I'm working on projects.

Add article 'a' before 'list'. 'Plannings' is incorrect in English; use 'plans'. Change embedded question 'how am I going to' to statement order 'how I am going to'. Use passive 'have been given to me' instead of 'I've been handled to me'. 'Whenever' can be simplified to 'when' for clarity.

× Some people don't like making lists because they might be overwhelmed or they find it hectic to take list for the things they can easily do it on their mind.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they might feel overwhelmed or find it hectic to make a list for things they can easily do in their heads.

Use 'feel overwhelmed' idiomatically. 'Take list' is incorrect; use 'make a list'. Use 'in their heads' rather than 'on their mind'. Remove redundant 'it' after 'do'.

× This could be one reason and another is making list is also some kind of task who is they cannot make every time or it's not available to.

✓ This could be one reason. Another reason is that making a list can be seen as a task they cannot do every time or one that is not convenient for them.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Add article 'a' before 'list'. Use 'that' to introduce the clause, and 'cannot do' instead of 'cannot make'. Replace 'not available to' with 'not convenient for them' for natural expression.

× These days I I do take notes on my mobile phone rather than paper because OK, mobile phones I have it with me every time, most of the time.

✓ These days I take notes on my mobile phone rather than on paper because I have my phone with me most of the time.

Remove redundant filler 'I'. Use 'on paper' to show medium. Avoid awkward phrasing 'mobile phones I have it with me'; use 'I have my phone with me most of the time'. Remove 'OK' and 'every time' repetition.

× And papers or notebooks it's not handy to carry everywhere I go, so I only take notes on my phone these days.

✓ Papers or notebooks are not handy to carry everywhere I go, so I only take notes on my phone these days.

Subject-verb agreement and article use: use plural verb 'are' with plural subject 'Papers or notebooks'. Remove contraction 'it's' which mismatches the plural subject. Sentence otherwise corrected for natural structure.