List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cevap daha net ve doğal olmalı. Konu cümlesiyle doğrudan yanıt verin, ardından gerekirse kısa bir açıklama ekleyin. Dilbilgisi hatalarını (zaman uyumu, yardımcı fiiller) düzeltin ve gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın. Bağlaçlar (for example, because, so) kullanarak mantığı güçlendirin. Öneri: "I usually..." veya "I don't usually..." ile başlayın, sonra nedenini kısa bir cümleyle açıklayın.

Exemplo: I don't usually make a shopping list for clothes because I tend to buy my favorite items on impulse. However, my father always makes a list for groceries because it helps him remember everything he needs.

Sugestão: Cevap daha düzenli ve daha az tekrar içermeli. Önce doğrudan yanıt verin (evet/hayır ve ne zaman), sonra nedenini kısa ve net bir şekilde açıklayın. Olumsuz sıfatları doğal ifadelerle değiştirin (ör. "confusing" yerine "disorganized"). Bağlaçlarla neden-sonuç ilişkisi kurun.

Exemplo: I don't usually make work lists except during exam weeks because my schedule becomes chaotic, and a list helps me stay organized and focused.

Sugestão: Cevap belirsiz ve tamamlanmamış; fikir açık ve mantıklı cümlelerle ifade edilmeli. Önce genel bir neden verin, sonra kısa bir açıklama veya örnek ekleyin. Dolaylı konuşmadan kaçının ve dolgu kelimelerini (uh) azaltın. Örneğin: "Some people prefer spontaneity" gibi net bir görüş belirtin ve nedenini açıklayın.

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer spontaneity; they enjoy deciding what to do in the moment and feel happier without strict plans.

Sugestão: Cevap geçmişten başlayıp açıklama yapıyor ancak zaman karışıklığı var. Doğrudan tercihinizi verin ve kısa bir neden belirtin. Gereksiz geçmiş zaman ifadelerinden kaçının ve daha doğal bağlaç kullanın. Ayrıca uygulama örneği verin (Notes, Google Keep).

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me and I use the Notes app to add and check items easily.

× I didn't go food shopping and my dad go to the food shopping and he has a list.

✓ I didn't go food shopping and my dad went to the food shop and he had a list.

The sentence mixes past and present verbs incorrectly. 'Didn't go' is past, so 'go' should be past 'went' and 'has' should be past 'had' to keep the same time frame. Also 'food shopping' is better phrased as 'food shop' or 'go food shopping'. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense: 'I didn't go food shopping, and my dad went to the food shop and he had a list.'

× I go to do clothes shopping but I don't have a list because like when I go to the store just I'm buying my favorites.

✓ I go clothes shopping but I don't have a list because when I go to the store I just buy my favourites.

Unnecessary infinitive 'to do' and incorrect progressive 'I'm buying' when describing habitual action. Use simple present for habits: 'I go clothes shopping' or better 'I go clothes shopping' and 'I just buy my favourites'. Remove filler 'like' and reorder for clarity.

× I don't work so much when I don't have an exam, but in exam weeks I need to get a list because it can be so mixing and it can be a very very unpositive thing for my working job.

✓ I don't work much when I don't have exams, but during exam weeks I need to make a list because it can be confusing and can have a very negative effect on my work.

Use correct adverb 'much' not 'so much' in this context, plural 'exams' for general reference, 'in exam weeks' should be 'during exam weeks', and 'get a list' is unnatural; use 'make a list'. 'So mixing' is incorrect; use 'confusing'. 'Unpositive' is not standard; use 'negative'. Also 'working job' is redundant; use 'work'.

× I think they like to uh, what they want in amount of the time and they Max they are happy and.

✓ I think they like to decide what they want at the time, and they are happy that way.

Original is fragmented and contains filler 'uh' and unclear phrases 'in amount of the time' and 'they Max'. Rephrase to a clear structure: 'decide what they want at the time' and 'they are happy that way'. This fixes sentence fragmentation and meaning.

× I don't use paper when I was in 8th grade.

✓ I didn't use paper when I was in 8th grade.

The time clause 'when I was in 8th grade' refers to the past, so the main verb should be in past tense: 'didn't use' rather than 'don't use'. This maintains correct past time reference.

× I have a phone that's why I'm getting my list on my phone.

✓ I have a phone, so I keep my list on it.

Use a logical connector 'so' instead of 'that's why' in this context and prefer simple present 'keep' for habitual action. 'I'm getting my list on my phone' is awkward; 'keep my list on it' is clearer and more natural.

× The apps of notes.

✓ I use the Notes app.

'The apps of notes' is an incorrect noun phrase. In English, specify the app name: 'the Notes app' or 'a notes app'. Use singular 'app' and place 'Notes' as the app name. Also better to form a full sentence: 'I use the Notes app.'