List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammatical accuracy and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, use correct verb forms and plural/singular forms, and keep it to at most 3–4 concise sentences. Add one specific detail (e.g., types of items) and use linking words (because, so) correctly.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store. Because I often forget items, I write down groceries like milk, bread and vegetables so I don’t miss anything. This helps me shop quickly and avoid extra trips.

Sugestão: Clarify the structure: give a direct topic sentence answering the question, then briefly explain how the list/timetable helps. Use correct prepositions and simpler phrasing, and connect ideas with linking words (for example, so, therefore).

Exemplo: Yes, I make a to-do list and a timetable for my work, and it works well. For example, I list tasks and assign times to each one, so I can focus on priorities and still leave time for breaks.

Sugestão: Be concise and avoid repetition. State the main reasons clearly and give one specific supporting reason or example. Use correct verb forms and articles, and link sentences smoothly (for instance, because, therefore).

Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to work spontaneously and feel a list is unnecessary. For instance, they trust their memory and believe they can remember tasks without writing them down.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a complete sentence, then give a clear reason and one brief example. Avoid sentence fragments and incorrect connectors. Use comparative phrasing correctly (compared with).

Exemplo: I prefer to make lists on paper because writing by hand helps me remember items better. For example, I tick off groceries as I shop, and seeing the checklist on paper makes it easier to spot what’s left compared with using my phone.

× Yes, I make a list when I going go to shop because sometimes I forgot to purchase the thing which I needed which I need so I can make a list for the groceries and I go to the shop.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I go shopping because sometimes I forget to buy the things I need, so I can make a list for groceries before I go to the shop.

Errors: incorrect verb form 'going go' and wrong verb tense 'forgot' instead of 'forget' for habitual action; awkward relative clauses 'which I needed which I need' and article use. Use present simple for routines (I make, I go, I forget). Use gerund 'go shopping' and 'buy' for purchase. Combine clauses for clarity.

× As I make a list for my work on which time I have to perform my work, so I make another timetable for my work.

✓ Because I make a list for my work with the times I need to do each task, I also make a timetable for my work.

Error: incorrect conjunction and structure 'As... so' and awkward phrase 'on which time I have to perform my work'. Rephrase using 'because' and use 'the times I need to do each task' for clarity. Maintain present simple for habits.

× According to timetable I can prefer to work and spare my time for rest of the work.

✓ According to the timetable, I can choose when to work and set aside time for the rest of my tasks.

Errors: missing article ('the timetable'), incorrect verb 'prefer to work' (use 'choose when to work'), and incorrect preposition/phrase 'spare my time for rest of the work'. Use 'set aside time for the rest of my tasks' for natural English.

× It works for me.

✓ It works for me.

This sentence is correct; present simple 'works' properly describes a habitual result. No change needed.

× Some of people don't like making list because they think that they can do their work according to their preferences.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they think they can do their work according to their preferences.

Error: unnecessary 'of' after 'some' and missing plural 'lists'. Use 'Some people' and plural 'making lists' for general statements.

× So that's why the reason they are not making list for their work.

✓ That is why they do not make lists for their work.

Redundant phrasing 'So that's why the reason' and wrong verb form 'are not making list'. Simplify to 'That is why they do not make lists' and use present simple for habitual action.

× They do not forgot to take things from the shop so that's why they will not make a list.

✓ They do not forget to take things from the shop, so they do not make a list.

Error: 'forgot' is past tense but context requires present simple 'forget'. Also inconsistent future 'will not make' — use present simple 'do not make' for habitual behavior. Remove redundant 'so that's why'.

× Prefer to make a list on paper.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper.

Missing subject 'I'. Sentences need a subject and verb; use 'I prefer' to answer the question directly.

× Because if I write it with the pen on a paper, so I remind what things I have written on the paper and what are the left as compared to phone.

✓ If I write it with a pen on paper, I remember what I have written and what is left, compared to using my phone.

Errors: redundant conjunctions 'Because if... so', article issues 'a pen on a paper' (should be 'a pen on paper'), and awkward phrasing 'what are the left'. Use 'remember' (present simple) and 'what is left' for clarity. Place 'compared to using my phone' at end for comparison.