Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and includes filler words like 'umm' which reduce fluency. Try to be more concise and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific supporting details. Avoid redundancy and filler words to sound more natural and effective.

Exemplo: No, I don't often go to the library because I grew up in a place where libraries were mainly for reading, and since I prefer math over reading, I rarely visited them.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to organize your response with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, avoid repeating the same information and be specific about your activities in the library.

Exemplo: I rarely go to the library, but when I do, it's usually to print documents or borrow books for my children. However, since I bought a photocopier, I hardly need to visit anymore.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by avoiding repetition and adding linking words to make it more coherent. Also, try to end your answer naturally without phrases like 'And thank you' which are unnecessary in this context.

Exemplo: No, I didn't go to the library as a child because I grew up in a remote community without one. Although we knew about libraries, we didn't have access to them.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks confidence and contains many filler words, which affects fluency. Try to give a more direct and confident response, using linking words to explain your reasoning. Avoid unnecessary fillers and be specific where possible.

Exemplo: I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but since China is a developed country, I believe they have good access to libraries and educational resources.

× No, I didn't often go to the library.

✓ No, I didn't often go to the library.

The sentence is grammatically correct in past tense; no correction needed.

× As a side, I barely go to the I rarely go to the library and if I go, I remember the last time I went to the library was just to print a few stuff.

✓ I rarely go to the library, and if I do, I remember the last time I went was just to print a few things.

The original sentence has redundancy and awkward phrasing ('barely go to the I rarely go'). Also, 'a few stuff' is incorrect because 'stuff' is uncountable; 'a few things' is correct. The correction improves clarity and grammar.

× I remember the last time I went to the library was just to print a few stuff.

✓ I remember the last time I went to the library was just to print a few things.

'Stuff' is an uncountable noun and cannot be preceded by 'a few'. 'A few' is used with countable nouns. Therefore, 'a few things' is the correct phrase.

× I also went there the second time over here in the USA and I was just to pick some few books for my children.

✓ I also went there the second time here in the USA, and I was just there to pick a few books for my children.

The phrase 'I was just to pick' is incomplete and incorrect; it should be 'I was just there to pick'. Also, 'some few books' is incorrect; 'a few books' is the proper quantifier for countable nouns.

× I was just to pick some few books for my children.

✓ I was just there to pick a few books for my children.

'Some few' is not a correct quantifier. Use 'a few' for a small number of countable items.

× I did not do it.

✓ I did not do it.

The sentence is grammatically correct in past tense; no correction needed.

× No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid because I grew up in a remote community where we did not even have a library.

✓ No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid because I grew up in a remote community where we did not even have a library.

The sentence is grammatically correct in past tense; no correction needed.

× We knew we read about libraries and books, but we did not have the luxury of having a library to ourselves.

✓ We knew about libraries and books, but we did not have the luxury of having a library to ourselves.

The phrase 'we knew we read about libraries' is awkward and unclear. 'We knew about libraries and books' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× I can not tell umm because I'm from Africa, umm one of the continents.

✓ I cannot tell because I'm from Africa, one of the continents.

'Can not' is better written as 'cannot' in formal writing. Also, 'umm' is a filler word and should be omitted for clarity.

× As you know, I believe Chinese or China is well advanced and I also wanna believe that they have access to libraries and all the luxury that they would need in the libraries.

✓ As you know, I believe China is well advanced, and I also want to believe that they have access to libraries and all the luxuries they need in the libraries.

'Chinese or China' is unclear; 'China' is the correct noun here. 'Wanna' is informal; 'want to' is appropriate. 'Luxury' should be plural 'luxuries' when referring to multiple comforts or advantages. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.