Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant, but to improve, try to use more varied vocabulary and add a linking phrase to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas and keep your answer concise within 4-5 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I frequently visit the library, particularly when I require a quiet environment to prepare for exams. Since it's conveniently located near my home, I find it very accessible. Moreover, the library offers an extensive collection of books and digital resources, which greatly supports my studies.

Sugestão: Your answer contains some unclear phrases and minor grammatical errors, such as 'preparing thoroughly the comics period'. To improve, ensure your sentences are grammatically correct and coherent. Use linking words to connect ideas and clarify your points with specific details.

Exemplo: I usually use the library to complete my homework and review assignments because it provides a quiet atmosphere for concentration. For instance, during reading or exam weeks, I spend extra time there revising thoroughly to ensure I understand the material well.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but contains a contradiction and a grammatical mistake in the last sentence. To improve, make sure your statements are consistent and grammatically correct. Also, try to expand your answer with linking words and specific reasons.

Exemplo: Not really. When I was a child, I preferred watching television or videos because I found them more entertaining than reading books. Consequently, I rarely visited the library during my childhood.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and includes examples, but to improve, use more varied vocabulary and ensure grammatical accuracy, such as 'revising for exams' and 'completing assignments'. Also, try to use linking words to enhance coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, many Chinese students at my university are diligent and motivated, so they frequently spend considerable time in the library. For example, they often go there to revise for exams and complete assignments, demonstrating their dedication to academic success.

× Especially during reading weeks or exam weeks.

✓ I especially spend more time there during reading weeks or exam weeks.

The original sentence is a sentence fragment lacking a main verb and subject, which makes it incomplete. To correct this, the sentence should be combined with the previous sentence or rephrased to include a subject and verb, ensuring it forms a complete sentence.

× I tend to spend more time there revising for my test and preparing thoroughly the comics period.

✓ I tended to spend more time there revising for my tests and preparing thoroughly during the exam period.

The original sentence mixes present tense 'tend' with past context and has awkward phrasing 'preparing thoroughly the comics period'. The verb tense should be past to match the context, and 'comics period' seems to be a mishearing or typo for 'exam period'. Also, 'test' should be plural if referring generally. The correction aligns tense and clarifies meaning.

× As a result, I really went to the library during my childhood.

✓ As a result, I rarely went to the library during my childhood.

The original sentence uses 'really' which is likely a misuse for 'rarely' in this context. The intended meaning is that the student did not often go to the library as a child. Correcting to 'rarely' conveys the intended meaning and fits the past tense context.

× For example, they usually go there for revising for exams or complete assignments, which shows their strong commitment to their studies.

✓ For example, they usually go there to revise for exams or complete assignments, which shows their strong commitment to their studies.

The phrase 'go there for revising' is incorrect because 'for' should be followed by a noun or gerund, but 'revising' here is better replaced by the infinitive 'to revise' to express purpose. Using 'to revise' and 'complete' in parallel structure is grammatically correct.