Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit long and somewhat unclear. Try to be more direct and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you can say, "I don't often go to the library because it's usually very quiet, which I find uncomfortable. However, I did enjoy the book I read there last year."

Exemplo: I don't often go to the library because it is usually very quiet, which makes me feel uneasy. However, I enjoyed the book I read there last year because it was very interesting.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be improved by using clearer linking words and avoiding repetition. For instance, instead of repeating "motivational books," you can say, "I usually look for motivational books because the library is very quiet, which helps me concentrate better than at home."

Exemplo: I usually look for motivational books in the library because it is very quiet there, allowing me to concentrate better than when I am at home.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and detailed, but you can improve coherence by using linking words like "because" and "so." For example, "I didn't go to the library as a kid because we didn't have any in my area. However, I started visiting the library in secondary school when I became the library prefect."

Exemplo: I didn't go to the library as a kid because there were none in my area. However, I started visiting the library in secondary school when I became the library prefect.

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit confusing and contains some unclear phrases like "their kids are so smart." Try to be more precise and avoid contradictions. For example, you can say, "Yes, many Chinese kids go to the library to explore their abilities from a young age. However, some also enjoy crafting activities."

Exemplo: Yes, many Chinese kids go to the library to explore their abilities from a young age. However, some also enjoy crafting activities as a hobby.

× it's been a while I went to the library that should be like last year

✓ it's been a while since I went to the library, that should be like last year

The original sentence lacks the preposition 'since' which is necessary to indicate the time elapsed since the last visit. The phrase 'it's been a while since I went' correctly expresses this idea.

× It was interesting, but staying in the library gets so quiet I don't.

✓ It was interesting, but staying in the library is so quiet that I don't enjoy it.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'that I don't enjoy it' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× it's a very intense place

✓ it's a very quiet place

The word 'intense' is not appropriate to describe a library's atmosphere. 'Quiet' is the correct adjective to describe the peaceful environment suitable for reading.

× it's the best place I get to read motivational books

✓ it's the best place for me to read motivational books

The preposition 'for' is needed to indicate purpose or suitability. 'For me to read' correctly expresses the intended meaning.

× Yes, I think Chinese kids often go to the library because their kids are so smart.

✓ Yes, I think Chinese kids often go to the library because they are so smart.

The pronoun 'their kids' is incorrect here as it refers to someone else's children. 'They' correctly refers back to 'Chinese kids'.

× From little age, they start to explore their abilities.

✓ From a young age, they start to explore their abilities.

The phrase 'from little age' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'from a young age' to indicate starting early in life.