Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: คุณควรใช้ tense ให้ถูกต้องและหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำ เช่น 'to to' และควรตอบตรงคำถามโดยใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติ เช่น ใช้ Present Perfect เพื่อบอกถึงประสบการณ์ในอดีตจนถึงปัจจุบัน

Exemplo: I used to go to the library often when I was a child, but since I started working, I haven't had much chance to visit it.

Sugestão: ควรใช้ tense ให้ถูกต้องและใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยค เช่น 'when' และ 'but' และหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำคำ เช่น 'in in' รวมถึงใช้คำกริยาในรูปแบบที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'go' เป็น 'went' และ 'reading' เป็น 'read'

Exemplo: When I was a child, I went to the library to read cartoon books, but when I was at university, I went there to read books for my exams.

Sugestão: ควรใช้ tense ให้ถูกต้องและหลีกเลี่ยงคำพูดซ้ำและคำเติมเต็มที่ไม่จำเป็น เช่น 'uh' และควรตอบตรงคำถามโดยใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติ

Exemplo: Yes, I used to go to the library often when I was a kid. I loved going to my school library whenever I had time to read books.

Sugestão: ควรตอบคำถามอย่างชัดเจนและหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดที่ไม่เกี่ยวข้อง เช่น 'I'm tired' และใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และถูกต้อง เช่น 'I think Chinese kids often go to the library because they study a lot.'

Exemplo: I'm not sure, but I think Chinese kids often go to the library because they study a lot.

× I used to go to the library often when I was a child, but when I start working I haven't a chance to to go there.

✓ I used to go to the library often when I was a child, but when I started working I haven't had a chance to go there.

The verb 'start' should be in the past tense 'started' to match the past time frame. Also, 'haven't a chance' is incorrect; it should be 'haven't had a chance' to use the present perfect tense correctly.

× When I was a child I go there to reading cartoon books, but when I grew up in in my universities I go there to reading a book for examination.

✓ When I was a child I went there to read cartoon books, but when I grew up in my university I went there to read books for examinations.

The verbs 'go' should be in past tense 'went' to match the past time frame. Also, 'to reading' is incorrect; it should be 'to read' because after 'to' we use the base form of the verb. 'Universities' should be singular 'university' if referring to one institution.

× Yes, I go to. I used to go to the library often when I was a kid. Uh, I love to go to library in my school, uh, whenever I have a time, I go there to read the books.

✓ Yes, I did. I used to go to the library often when I was a kid. Uh, I loved to go to the library in my school, uh, whenever I had time, I went there to read books.

'I go to' should be 'I did' to answer past tense question. 'Love' should be past tense 'loved' to match past time. 'To library' needs the article 'the library'. 'Have a time' is incorrect; it should be 'had time' without 'a'. 'Go' should be past tense 'went'. 'The books' can be just 'books' unless specific books are meant.

× I love to go to library in my school, uh, whenever I have a time, I go there to read the books.

✓ I love to go to the library at my school, uh, whenever I have time, I go there to read books.

The preposition 'in' should be 'at' when referring to a location like a school. Also, 'have a time' is incorrect; it should be 'have time' without 'a'. 'The books' can be just 'books' unless specific books are meant.

× I don't know because I'm not a Chinese kid. I'm tired, but I think Chinese kids go to the library often. I think they have study.

✓ I don't know because I'm not a Chinese kid. I'm tired, but I think Chinese kids go to the library often. I think they study.

'Have study' is incorrect; the verb 'study' should be used directly in present tense to express habitual action.