Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'with a big passion SO'는 의미가 불분명하며, 'love read a book' 대신 'love reading books'라고 해야 합니다. 또한, 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Exemplo: Yes, I go to the library every day because I am a university student and I love reading books.

Sugestão: 답변이 단편적이고 문법적으로 부자연스럽습니다. 문장을 완성형으로 만들고, 연결어를 사용하여 내용을 풍부하게 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Exemplo: First, I usually read books, and then I find my class papers to study.

Sugestão: 과거 시제 사용에 오류가 있고, 불필요한 'umm'이 많아 자연스럽지 않습니다. 문장을 명확하게 하고, 과거 시제를 올바르게 사용하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Exemplo: Yes, of course. When I was a kid, my parents told me that reading many books was important.

Sugestão: 답변이 명확하지 않고, 'suggest'의 사용이 부적절합니다. 자신의 의견을 분명히 표현하고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Exemplo: I am not sure, but I think many Chinese kids go to the library because most children enjoy reading books.

× Yes, I go to the library every day because I am a university student with a big passion SO and I love read a book.

✓ Yes, I go to the library every day because I am a university student with a big passion, so I love to read books.

The conjunction 'SO' should be lowercase 'so' and preceded by a comma to connect two independent clauses properly. Also, 'love read a book' is incorrect; it should be 'love to read books' to express habitual action correctly.

× Oh, first. Reading books and. Hmm. Found my class paper.

✓ Oh, first, I read books and find my class paper.

The sentence fragments lack a subject and proper verb forms. 'Reading books' should be 'I read books' to form a complete sentence. 'Found my class paper' should be 'find my class paper' to maintain present tense and subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, of course. Umm, when I was a kid, umm, my parents say reading many books is important to me.

✓ Yes, of course. Umm, when I was a kid, umm, my parents said reading many books was important to me.

The verb 'say' should be in past tense 'said' to match the past time frame 'when I was a kid'. Also, 'is' should be 'was' to maintain tense consistency.

× Umm I don't know because I am a Korean, but I suggest Chinese kids often go to the library because all children like books.

✓ Umm, I don't know because I am Korean, but I think Chinese kids often go to the library because all children like books.

The verb 'suggest' is not appropriate here without an object or modal verb. 'I think' is more suitable to express opinion. Also, 'a Korean' should be 'Korean' as nationality adjectives do not take an article.