Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your sentences concise. For example, instead of repeating 'But', you can say 'However'. Also, clarify your points with specific details.

Exemplo: I used to go to the library often when I was a student, but now I rarely go because I have graduated. However, I still enjoy reading ebooks online, mostly novels rather than academic materials.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas logically with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'also' to connect your points. Avoid confusing phrases and check your vocabulary usage.

Exemplo: When I was a student, I often used the library to borrow books for self-study. Also, the university provided recorded lectures, which I watched later if I missed classes.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and using more precise vocabulary. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, try to avoid vague phrases like 'things' and be more specific.

Exemplo: Yes, I went to the library very often as a child because I loved reading. I enjoyed cartoon books and novels, which helped me explore new worlds and expand my imagination even though I couldn't travel much.

Sugestão: Your answer needs clearer structure and better grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons or examples. Avoid fragmented sentences and improve vocabulary accuracy.

Exemplo: I think many Chinese children often go to the library because of the competitive education environment. Parents encourage their kids to study hard and read more books to improve their knowledge.

× In the past yes, but nowaday it's quite limited for me to go to the library because I already graduated from the university.

✓ In the past, yes, but nowadays it's quite difficult for me to go to the library because I have already graduated from the university.

The word 'nowaday' is incorrect; the correct form is 'nowadays'. Also, 'it's quite limited for me to go' is unnatural; 'it's quite difficult for me to go' is better. The present perfect tense 'have already graduated' is appropriate here to indicate a past action with present relevance.

× But I write to read ebooks online.

✓ But I like to read ebooks online.

The phrase 'I write to read' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'I like to read' to express preference or habit.

× But The thing is at least what the novels, not the knowledge things.

✓ But the thing is, I read novels at least, not knowledge books.

The original sentence is unclear and incorrectly structured. Adding commas and rephrasing improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I therefore eat running when I was a student at the university, they have some recordings of learning it.

✓ Therefore, when I was a student at the university, I used to listen to some recorded lectures.

The original sentence is confusing and contains incorrect word usage ('eat running'). Replacing with 'used to listen to recorded lectures' clarifies the meaning and corrects grammar.

× We didn't attend the class so we can see the record after and I used to borrow a book from the library to continue study by myself at the dominicity.

✓ We didn't attend the class, so we could watch the recordings later, and I used to borrow books from the library to continue studying by myself at home.

'See the record' is incorrect; 'watch the recordings' is better. 'Continue study' should be 'continue studying'. 'Dominicity' is incorrect; 'home' is appropriate here.

× Yes, very often, because when I was a kid I really loved to read a book and I like to read the cartoon book, the novels, things and it's explore my world.

✓ Yes, very often, because when I was a kid I really loved to read books and I liked to read cartoon books, novels, and other things, and they helped me explore my world.

Use plural forms 'books', 'cartoon books', and 'novels' when referring to multiple items. Also, 'it's explore' is incorrect; 'they helped me explore' is correct.

× Even we didn't go to see the world by our eyes, but the book can open ours knowledge and imaginations.

✓ Even if we didn't see the world with our own eyes, books can open our knowledge and imagination.

'Ours knowledge and imaginations' is incorrect; the correct possessive pronoun is 'our', and 'imagination' is usually uncountable.

× I think so because in China they are a lot of competitions, the family, the parent, they afford to take their kids, go to study, continue studying and reading book.

✓ I think so because in China there are a lot of competitions. Families and parents can afford to take their kids to study, continue studying, and read books.

'They are a lot of competitions' should be 'there are a lot of competitions'. 'The family, the parent' should be plural 'families and parents'. 'Reading book' should be 'reading books'.