Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat long and slightly redundant. Try to be more concise and directly answer the question first, then add specific supporting details using linking words for coherence. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and ensure clarity.

Exemplo: No, I don't go to the library often now. However, during my college days, I used it frequently because physiotherapy books were expensive. Therefore, the library helped me access important articles and stay updated in my field.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but repetitive with the use of 'so' and lacks linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Try to vary your vocabulary and use linking words like 'therefore' or 'for example' to improve coherence.

Exemplo: In the library, I usually study and read important journals. This calm environment allows me to focus without interruptions, which helps me stay updated in my profession.

Sugestão: Your answer is incomplete and contains filler words like 'uh'. Try to give a complete and clear response with proper sentence structure. Avoid fillers and finish your thoughts fully.

Exemplo: No, I did not go to the library as a child because there was no library near my home at that time.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks a clear subject and has grammatical errors. Use complete sentences with proper subjects and verbs. Also, explain your points clearly using linking words for better flow.

Exemplo: Yes, I have seen that Chinese kids often go to the library. This is because the habit of reading is encouraged from a young age, which helps them become disciplined and punctual in their studies.

× I have done my physiotherapy from a university so most of the books were very expensive.

✓ I have done my physiotherapy at a university, so most of the books were very expensive.

The preposition 'from' is incorrectly used with 'done my physiotherapy'. The correct preposition is 'at' to indicate the place where the physiotherapy was done. Also, a comma is needed before 'so' to separate the clauses properly.

× So I used the library books to reach all the articles and remain updated with my profession.

✓ So I used the library books to access all the articles and remain updated in my profession.

The verb 'reach' is incorrect in this context; 'access' is the appropriate verb when referring to obtaining articles. Also, the preposition 'with' after 'updated' should be 'in' to correctly express being updated in a profession.

× It is a great source of knowledge from where you can.

✓ It is a great source of knowledge from where you can learn a lot.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb or object after 'can'. Adding 'learn a lot' completes the sentence meaningfully.

× Library is a place where we can study in a calm and composed environment.

✓ The library is a place where we can study in a calm and composed environment.

The noun 'library' here refers to a specific place, so the definite article 'the' is required before it.

× So definitely I used to study and read the important journals that keep me updated towards my profession.

✓ So definitely I used to study and read the important journals that keep me updated about my profession.

The phrase 'keep me updated towards my profession' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'about' to indicate the subject of the update.

× No, I didn't uh, go to the library when I was young or a kid because at that time uh library was not present in my vicinity, so I didn't get the.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library when I was young or a kid because at that time the library was not present in my vicinity, so I didn't get the chance.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks the object after 'didn't get the'. Also, the definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' to specify it. Removing filler words like 'uh' improves clarity.

× Have seen Chinese kids often going to the library.

✓ I have seen Chinese kids often going to the library.

The sentence lacks the subject 'I' which is necessary for proper sentence structure.

× It is because of the installation of this habit at a very young age and making them self disciplined and punctual of reading books on a daily basis.

✓ It is because of the instillation of this habit at a very young age, making them self-disciplined and punctual in reading books on a daily basis.

The word 'installation' is incorrect; the correct word is 'instillation' meaning gradual introduction. Also, 'self disciplined' should be hyphenated as 'self-disciplined'. The phrase 'punctual of reading' is incorrect; it should be 'punctual in reading'. The conjunction 'and' is better replaced with a comma to connect the participial phrase.