Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it contains some hesitations and filler words like 'uh' which affect the natural flow. Also, avoid repeating words such as 'from from'. Try to make your sentences more concise and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I used to visit the library often as a child because I found it very relaxing. However, now that I am busy with work, I prefer downloading e-books on my tablet since I can easily adjust the font size, which makes reading more comfortable.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but is a bit short and contains a repetition error ('have have'). To improve, provide more specific details and use linking words to make your response more coherent and natural.

Exemplo: When I visit the library, I usually head straight to the section with my favorite author's books to check if there are any new releases or updated editions. Additionally, I sometimes browse other genres to discover new authors.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and provides specific details, but the tense consistency could be improved (mixing past and present). Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: Yes, I was very passionate about comic books based on my favorite cartoons. Whenever I visited a shopping center, the first place I went to was the library, where I would spend hours reading those comics.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words to enhance coherence. Also, avoid redundancy such as 'would rather prefer' (choose one).

Exemplo: Chinese children still visit libraries, but not as frequently as when I was young. This is mainly because the digital shift has influenced the younger generation, who now prefer watching TV shows and movies over reading books.

× Shifting from from physical books to digital books has made my life much more easier because I can adjust the font.

✓ Shifting from physical books to digital books has made my life much easier because I can adjust the font.

The phrase 'much more easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is already a comparative adjective. Using 'more' with a comparative adjective is redundant. The correct form is 'much easier' to intensify the comparative adjective.

× When I go to the library, the 1st place I usually go is my favorite author's books.

✓ When I go to the library, the first place I usually go to is my favorite author's books.

The original sentence lacks the preposition 'to' after 'go' which is necessary when indicating a destination. Adding 'to' after 'go' clarifies the sentence structure and makes it grammatically correct.

× I see if they have released new books or a new edition have have come out.

✓ I check if they have released new books or if a new edition has come out.

The original sentence has repetition ('have have') and incorrect verb agreement. Also, 'I see if' is awkward; 'I check if' is more appropriate. The verb 'has' should be used with the singular noun 'edition'. Correcting these improves clarity and grammar.

× each time I go to a shopping center, the 1st place I visit in that center would be the library and I would spend hours looking at those cartoons.

✓ Each time I went to a shopping center, the first place I visited in that center was the library and I would spend hours looking at those cartoons.

Since the context is about past habits, the verbs should be in the past tense. 'Go' and 'visit' should be changed to 'went' and 'visited' respectively to maintain tense consistency.

× They would rather prefer watching TV shows and movies instead.

✓ They would rather watch TV shows and movies instead.

The phrase 'would rather prefer' is redundant because both 'would rather' and 'prefer' express preference. The correct form is 'would rather watch' followed by the base verb without 'prefer'.