Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and slightly off-topic. Try to give a clear, direct response first, then add specific reasons or examples. Avoid redundancy like mentioning both library and book shops without clear connection. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading. For example, I visit weekly to borrow new books and find a quiet place to read.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and lacks structure. Start with a direct answer, then explain with details using linking words. Avoid vague phrases like 'just searching' without context. Be specific about your activities in the library.

Exemplo: In the library, I usually spend time searching for books that interest me. Sometimes it takes a while to find the right one, but I enjoy exploring different genres.

Sugestão: Your answer is mostly clear but could be more concise and structured. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Provide a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details.

Exemplo: No, I didn't go to the library much as a child because I only started reading books around age 12. However, I visited libraries occasionally when my teachers asked me to.

Sugestão: Avoid giving short or negative answers. Instead, try to give an opinion or speculate based on your knowledge. Use linking words to express uncertainty politely and add some content to your answer.

Exemplo: I'm not sure about all Chinese kids, but I think many of them do go to the library, especially for studying or borrowing books, because libraries are important for education.

× I often go to the library to get new books and to read them.

✓ I often go to the library to get new books and read them.

The phrase 'to read them' is redundant after 'to get new books' because 'to get new books and read them' is more concise and natural in English. Removing the second 'to' improves sentence flow.

× I often go to the book shops.

✓ I often go to bookshops.

In English, 'bookshops' is commonly used as one word without the article 'the' when speaking generally. Also, 'bookshops' is plural and does not require 'the' unless referring to specific shops.

× Usually it takes too long to find the best book for me or to find the specific 1, so generally I'm just searching.

✓ Usually, it takes too long to find the best book for me or to find a specific one, so generally I'm just searching.

The sentence had a vague reference 'the specific 1' which should be 'a specific one' for clarity. Also, a comma after 'Usually' improves readability. The sentence structure is improved by clarifying the object and adding punctuation.

× Honestly no, because I was only uh, around 12 or 13 when I started reading books so I wasn't going to the libraries when I was a kid, only if my teachers would ask.

✓ Honestly no, because I was only around 12 or 13 when I started reading books, so I didn't go to the libraries when I was a kid, only if my teachers asked.

The phrase 'wasn't going' is better replaced with 'didn't go' to correctly express past habitual action. Also, 'only if my teachers would ask' should be 'only if my teachers asked' to correctly use past tense in conditional clauses.