Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat agar lebih natural dan efektif. Gunakan kalimat yang langsung menjawab pertanyaan dan hindari pengulangan kata yang tidak perlu.

Exemplo: Yes, I often go to the library because I need to find books for my studies, both when I was a student and now.

Sugestão: Gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dengan kalimat utama dan detail pendukung yang jelas. Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk kelancaran.

Exemplo: Usually, I read books in the library. Additionally, I sometimes go there to find a quiet place to work or research for my thesis. I also enjoy meeting people in the library.

Sugestão: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan buat kalimat lebih singkat dan jelas. Hindari pengulangan dan gunakan kalimat yang langsung menjawab pertanyaan.

Exemplo: Yes, I went to the library sometimes, but not often because I preferred playing when I was a kid.

Sugestão: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan buat kalimat lebih jelas dan terstruktur. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk menghubungkan ide dan hindari pengulangan kata.

Exemplo: I think Chinese kids often go to the library because their parents encourage them to read books and use the library as a resource for learning.

× Yes, it it back to when I was a student both in school and in college.

✓ Yes, it goes back to when I was a student, both in school and in college.

The original sentence has a repetition error ('it it') and lacks a main verb to complete the sentence. Adding 'goes' corrects the sentence structure and clarifies the meaning.

× I often go to the library for searching some books from my educational references.

✓ I often go to the library to search for some books from my educational references.

The verb 'go' is followed by the infinitive form 'to search' rather than the gerund 'searching'. Also, 'search for' is the correct phrasal verb.

× Simply to read book that.

✓ I simply read books there.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a subject and proper verb form. Adding 'I' as subject and 'read books' completes the sentence meaningfully.

× Also sometimes I'm going to library to find a quiet place to do some jobs or to do some research for my thesis.

✓ Also, sometimes I go to the library to find a quiet place to do some work or to do some research for my thesis.

The phrase 'I'm going' suggests present continuous which is less appropriate here; simple present 'I go' fits habitual action better. Also, 'jobs' is better replaced with 'work' in this context.

× And of course I love to meeting people in the library.

✓ And of course, I love meeting people in the library.

After 'love', the gerund form 'meeting' is used rather than the infinitive 'to meeting', which is incorrect.

× Yes, but it is not often because when I was a kid, I'm I'm more than.

✓ Yes, but it was not often because when I was a kid, I was more into playing.

The sentence mixes present tense 'is' and 'I'm' with past context. Changing to past tense 'was' and rephrasing clarifies the meaning.

× I'm more to play than to go to library because as you know, kids love to play.

✓ I preferred playing to going to the library because, as you know, kids love to play.

The original sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. Using 'preferred playing to going' correctly expresses the comparison.

× So I don't often go to the library when I was a kid.

✓ So I didn't often go to the library when I was a kid.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't' with past time 'when I was a kid'. The past tense 'didn't' is appropriate here.

× I think yes, because it is their habit, their parents to teach their son to always search from search for a book, search for a reference in library and to get often to go to library to read a book.

✓ I think yes, because it is their habit; their parents teach their children to always search for books and references in the library and to often go to the library to read.

The original sentence has pronoun errors ('their son' should be 'their children'), awkward phrasing, and incorrect prepositions. Correcting pronouns and restructuring improves clarity and grammar.