Part 1
Examinador
Do you often go to the library?
Candidato
Not regularly, but I used to go to library when the exam came nearby the date. So I used to go to library to study.
Examinador
What do you usually do in the library?
Candidato
I usually do study with us. I have to prepare for my enzymes in the peaceful environment of the library, so I do study in library.
Examinador
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Candidato
No, I didn't go to library when I was child, but nowadays I used to go to library to focus on my studies in peaceful environment and the for example, I was dead. I do not like to study. I used to study at home, so nowadays I go to library.
Examinador
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Candidato
I don't know because I have never had experience about the Chinese states, so I do not think that they though or not.
Do you often go to the library?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Use correct prepositions and avoid repetition. For example, say 'I don't go regularly, but I usually visit the library when exams are near to study.'
Exemplo: I don't go to the library regularly, but I usually visit it when exams are approaching to prepare for my tests.
What do you usually do in the library?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct vocabulary. For example, say 'I usually study there because the peaceful environment helps me concentrate, especially when preparing for my exams.'
Exemplo: I usually study in the library because its peaceful environment helps me focus, especially when I am preparing for my exams.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: Make your answer clearer and more coherent. Avoid confusing phrases and use linking words. For example, say 'No, I didn't go to the library as a child. I preferred studying at home because I didn't like studying much. But now, I go to the library to focus better.'
Exemplo: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a child because I didn't like studying much and preferred to study at home. However, now I go to the library to concentrate better.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Pontuação: 30.0Sugestão: Try to answer more directly and clearly. Use correct grammar and vocabulary. For example, say 'I am not sure because I have no experience with Chinese children, so I cannot say whether they often go to the library or not.'
Exemplo: I am not sure because I have no experience with Chinese children, so I cannot say whether they often go to the library or not.
× Not regularly, but I used to go to library when the exam came nearby the date.
✓ Not regularly, but I used to go to the library when the exam date was near.
The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Also, 'came nearby the date' is incorrect; it should be 'when the exam date was near' to express the time correctly.
× So I used to go to library to study.
✓ So I used to go to the library to study.
Again, 'library' needs the definite article 'the' because it is a specific place. Omitting 'the' is incorrect in this context.
× I usually do study with us.
✓ I usually study by myself.
The phrase 'do study with us' is ungrammatical and unclear. The correct structure is 'I usually study by myself' or 'I usually study alone' to express studying individually.
× I have to prepare for my enzymes in the peaceful environment of the library, so I do study in library.
✓ I have to prepare for my exams in the peaceful environment of the library, so I study in the library.
'Enzymes' is incorrect; the intended word is 'exams'. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. The phrase 'do study' is unnecessary; simple present 'study' suffices.
× No, I didn't go to library when I was child, but nowadays I used to go to library to focus on my studies in peaceful environment and the for example, I was dead.
✓ No, I didn't go to the library when I was a child, but nowadays I go to the library to focus on my studies in a peaceful environment. For example, I was tired.
'Library' requires 'the'. 'Child' needs the article 'a'. 'Used to' is for past habits, so 'nowadays' with 'used to' is incorrect; simple present 'go' is correct. 'Peaceful environment' needs the article 'a'. The phrase 'and the for example, I was dead' is unclear and likely a mistake; 'I was tired' is a reasonable correction.
× I do not like to study. I used to study at home, so nowadays I go to library.
✓ I do not like to study. I used to study at home, but nowadays I go to the library.
'Library' needs 'the'. The conjunction 'so' is better replaced with 'but' to contrast past and present habits.
× I don't know because I have never had experience about the Chinese states, so I do not think that they though or not.
✓ I don't know because I have never had experience with Chinese students, so I do not think whether they do or not.
The phrase 'experience about' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'experience with'. 'Chinese states' is likely a mistake for 'Chinese students'. 'They though or not' is unclear; 'whether they do or not' is correct to express uncertainty.