Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and redundant phrases. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific reasons using linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: No, I don't often go to the library because I can access many books online. Moreover, my busy work schedule leaves me little free time to visit the library.

Sugestão: Improve grammar and sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about your activities. Avoid informal phrases like 'you know' in formal speaking.

Exemplo: The library is a quiet and peaceful place, so when I visit, I usually listen to music podcasts with my headphones to relax after a busy day at work.

Sugestão: Avoid filler sounds like 'MMM' and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Provide a clear topic sentence and specific reason to make your answer more effective.

Exemplo: Unfortunately, I did not go to the library when I was a kid because there was no library nearby, so I never had the chance to visit one.

Sugestão: Work on grammar and sentence structure to improve clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Be specific and avoid repetition. Also, correct plural and article usage.

Exemplo: Nowadays, libraries are popular places for Chinese kids to read stories and conduct research for school projects. Therefore, parents encourage their children to visit libraries and develop good reading habits, which is a positive trend worldwide.

× You know library is a quiet and peaceful place, so when I go to the library I usually do listening to music podcast with my headphone and that make me relax from a busy work.

✓ You know the library is a quiet and peaceful place, so when I go to the library I usually listen to music podcasts with my headphones and that makes me relax from a busy work.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' to specify the particular place. Also, 'do listening to' is incorrect; the correct form is 'listen to'. 'Music podcast' should be plural 'music podcasts' to match the context. 'Headphone' should be plural 'headphones' as people usually use both ears. 'That make' should be 'that makes' to agree with singular subject 'that'.

× Now they libraries are popular place to visit story and research for the school's projects.

✓ Now libraries are popular places to visit for stories and research for school projects.

The phrase 'they libraries' is incorrect; 'libraries' alone is sufficient. 'Popular place' should be plural 'popular places' to agree with plural subject 'libraries'. 'Visit story' should be 'visit for stories' to make sense. 'The school's projects' is better as 'school projects' for general meaning.

× So every parents are encouraging to their kids to go to library and encourage them to read the books.

✓ So every parent is encouraging their kids to go to the library and encouraging them to read books.

'Every parents' is incorrect; 'every' is singular so it should be 'every parent'. 'Are encouraging to their kids' should be 'is encouraging their kids' without 'to'. 'Encourage' should be 'encouraging' to maintain parallel structure. 'The books' should be 'books' as general plural.