Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: In your answer, try to avoid redundancy and keep your sentences concise. For example, instead of repeating "in the past" and "nowadays," you can combine ideas more naturally. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I don't go to the library often now, but I used to visit regularly to find information and read books for my studies because the quiet atmosphere helped me relax and concentrate after a busy day.

Sugestão: Pay attention to grammar and sentence structure, such as subject-verb agreement and article usage. Also, use linking words like 'however' or 'if' to make your answer more coherent. Try to avoid small errors like 'reads' instead of 'read' and 'it is doesn't' which should be 'it doesn't'.

Exemplo: Whenever I go to the library, I usually pick my favorite books to read because I enjoy the stories and find them relaxing. However, if I don't find any, I try a new one by reading the first couple of pages. If the book catches my attention, I continue reading; if not, I move on to another book.

Sugestão: Focus on correct verb tenses and article usage. For example, use 'didn't have a library' and 'left books at home'. Also, clarify your ideas with linking words like 'so' and 'therefore' to improve coherence.

Exemplo: Unfortunately, when I was a kid, my school and neighborhood didn't have a library, so I left books at home or borrowed them from my older brother after he finished high school. Therefore, I was still able to enjoy reading even without access to a school library.

Sugestão: Be careful with word choice and spelling, for example, 'sore' should be 'sure', and 'money useful results' is unclear. Use clearer vocabulary and correct grammar. Also, use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly to connect ideas logically.

Exemplo: I'm not completely sure, but I think many Chinese kids go to the library regularly because their parents encourage them to study hard and improve their academic knowledge. Therefore, visiting the library provides a quiet place and access to useful resources for their development.

× Whenever I go to library, I usually pick my favorite book to reads because I enjoy the stories and find them relaxing.

✓ Whenever I go to the library, I usually pick my favorite book to read because I enjoy the stories and find them relaxing.

The verb 'reads' is incorrect here because after 'to' we use the base form of the verb, which is 'read'. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener.

× Whenever I go to library, I usually pick my favorite book to reads because I enjoy the stories and find them relaxing.

✓ Whenever I go to the library, I usually pick my favorite book to read because I enjoy the stories and find them relaxing.

The noun 'library' is a singular, countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific library. Omitting 'the' is incorrect in this context.

× If the book catch my attention, I continue reading more but it is doesn't interest me, I move on to another book.

✓ If the book catches my attention, I continue reading more but if it doesn't interest me, I move on to another book.

The verb 'catch' must agree with the singular subject 'book', so it should be 'catches'. Also, 'it is doesn't interest me' is incorrect; it should be 'if it doesn't interest me' to form a proper conditional sentence.

× If the book catch my attention, I continue reading more but it is doesn't interest me, I move on to another book.

✓ If the book catches my attention, I continue reading more but if it doesn't interest me, I move on to another book.

The phrase 'but it is doesn't interest me' is grammatically incorrect. The correct conjunction to connect the two clauses is 'but if', and 'doesn't' should not be preceded by 'is'.

× Unfortunately when I was a kid my school and the place I live didn't have library so I just leave it book at home or borrow from my older brother after he finished high school.

✓ Unfortunately, when I was a kid, my school and the place I lived didn't have a library, so I just left books at home or borrowed from my older brother after he finished high school.

The verbs 'leave' and 'borrow' should be in the past tense 'left' and 'borrowed' to match the past time frame. Also, 'live' should be 'lived' to maintain past tense consistency. 'Library' needs the indefinite article 'a' because it is singular and countable. 'It book' is incorrect; it should be 'books'.

× Unfortunately when I was a kid my school and the place I live didn't have library so I just leave it book at home or borrow from my older brother after he finished high school.

✓ Unfortunately, when I was a kid, my school and the place I lived didn't have a library, so I just left books at home or borrowed from my older brother after he finished high school.

The noun 'library' is singular and countable, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' when mentioned for the first time. Also, 'it book' is incorrect; it should be 'books' without 'it'.

× They help me enjoy reading even without accessing to a school library.

✓ They help me enjoy reading even without access to a school library.

The phrase 'accessing to' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'access to' because 'access' is a noun here and does not require the verb form 'accessing' or the preposition 'to' after it.

× I'm not completely sore, but I think many Chinese kids do go to the library regularly.

✓ I'm not completely sure, but I think many Chinese kids do go to the library regularly.

The word 'sore' is a mistake for 'sure'. 'Sore' refers to pain, while 'sure' means confident or certain. This is a vocabulary error affecting meaning.

× This is because their parents often can correct them to study hard and improve their academic knowledge.

✓ This is because their parents often encourage them to study hard and improve their academic knowledge.

The modal verb 'can' is incorrectly used here. 'Can correct them to study' is not idiomatic. The correct verb is 'encourage' to express motivating someone to do something.

× So visiting the library provides a quiet place and access to money useful results for them to develop.

✓ So visiting the library provides a quiet place and access to many useful resources for them to develop.

The phrase 'money useful results' is incorrect. It should be 'many useful resources'. 'Money' is a noun and does not modify 'useful results'. 'Resources' fits the context better than 'results'.