Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat natural but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "books can sometimes cause costs of a fortune" and "give your different kinds of perspectives to the world." Try to use clearer and more natural expressions. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually go to the library once or twice a week because buying books can be expensive. Moreover, the library offers a wide range of books that help me see different perspectives on various topics.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but a bit short and could be improved by adding more specific details and using linking words to make it more coherent. Also, avoid using "will" for habitual actions; use present simple instead.

Exemplo: Usually, I go to the library in the morning and spend two or three hours reading. I find it a quiet place where I can focus on my studies without distractions.

Sugestão: Your answer has some repetition and awkward phrasing, such as "library library" and "when I grew where I was growing up." Try to express your ideas more clearly and naturally. Also, add linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: I didn't go to the library as a child because there was no library in the city where I grew up. I wish I had the chance to visit one back then.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas logically using linking words, avoid filler words like "uh," and express your opinion clearly. Also, correct grammar mistakes and use appropriate vocabulary.

Exemplo: Nowadays, I think Chinese children do not often go to the library because social media and mobile applications provide easy access to information. Therefore, many parents prefer their children to use the Internet rather than visit the library.

× Yes, I go to library like once a week or maybe even twice a week sometimes because books can sometimes cause costs of a fortune and I can't afford it now.

✓ Yes, I go to the library like once a week or maybe even twice a week sometimes because books can sometimes cost a fortune and I can't afford it now.

The phrase 'go to library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library' because it refers to a specific place. Also, 'cause costs of a fortune' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'cost a fortune' meaning something is very expensive.

× And in the library you can choose the whole range of books and give your different kinds of perspectives to the world.

✓ And in the library you can choose from the whole range of books and gain different kinds of perspectives on the world.

The verb 'choose' is usually followed by the preposition 'from' when selecting from a range. Also, 'give your different kinds of perspectives to the world' is awkward; 'gain different kinds of perspectives on the world' is more natural and correct.

× Well, I will only do some reading in the library, and usually I would go in the morning, spend two or three hours there, then leave.

✓ Well, I usually only do some reading in the library, and I usually go in the morning, spend two or three hours there, then leave.

Using 'will' here is incorrect because the student is talking about habitual actions, so the simple present tense 'usually do' is appropriate. Also, mixing 'will' and 'would' is inconsistent; 'would' is conditional or past habitual, but here simple present is better.

× I wish I could, but I didn't because there wasn't a library library in my city when I grew where I was growing up.

✓ I wish I could, but I didn't because there wasn't a library in my city where I was growing up.

The phrase 'when I grew where I was growing up' is incorrect and redundant. The correct phrase is 'where I was growing up' to indicate location in the past. Also, the repeated word 'library' is a typo and should be removed.

× Well, for the kids now, I would say no because, uh, the social media, I mean, the different applications on the phone are so popular now you can just reach to any kind of source resources, uh, through the Internet and most parents tend to do that in because if they need to send their kids to library.

✓ Well, for kids now, I would say no because social media, I mean, the different applications on the phone are so popular now you can just access any kind of resources through the Internet and most parents tend to do that because they don't need to send their kids to the library.

The phrase 'reach to any kind of source resources' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'access' without 'to'. Also, 'send their kids to library' is missing the article 'the'. The phrase 'tend to do that in because if they need to send' is confusing and corrected to 'tend to do that because they don't need to send' for clarity and grammar.