Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like 'I feel like I have to read any books' and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: No, I don't often go to the library. However, when I want to read, I usually visit my university library to read fictional books with my friends.

Sugestão: Try to avoid filler words like 'Uh' and improve grammar, such as tense consistency and article usage. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about your activities.

Exemplo: I usually go to the library to study. Besides that, I borrow books recommended by my teachers because I enjoy reading as a hobby.

Sugestão: Improve sentence clarity and vocabulary. 'Did not get the access for library' should be 'did not have access to a library.' Also, 'story quality' is unclear; use 'storybooks' or 'books with good stories.' Avoid redundancy and use linking words.

Exemplo: No, I did not have access to a library as a child. However, my father often bought me historical books and storybooks from bookstores and markets.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Avoid vague phrases like 'quite familiar to go to the library.' Use correct grammar and linking words to make your answer coherent and specific.

Exemplo: I am not very familiar with Chinese children, but I believe many of them visit libraries often because their education system is quite advanced.

× I tend to go my university library and sit next to my friends and read a fictional book.

✓ I tend to go to my university library and sit next to my friends and read a fictional book.

The verb 'go' is usually followed by the preposition 'to' when indicating a destination. Missing 'to' before 'my university library' is a preposition error (ID 11). Correct usage is 'go to the library'.

× I tend to go my university library and sit next to my friends and read a fictional book.

✓ I tend to go to my university library and sit next to my friends and read a fictional book.

The phrase 'go my university library' lacks the preposition 'to' which is necessary to indicate direction or destination. The correct phrase is 'go to my university library'. This is a preposition error (ID 11).

× I start to reading them because reading is kind of my hobby.

✓ I start reading them because reading is kind of my hobby.

After the verb 'start', the gerund form (verb + -ing) should be used without 'to'. 'Start to reading' is incorrect; it should be 'start reading'. This is a verb form error (ID 10).

× I took some books from the library from my teachers and I start to reading them because reading is kind of my hobby.

✓ I took some books from the library from my teachers and I started reading them because reading is kind of my hobby.

The sentence mixes past tense 'took' with present tense 'start'. Both actions happened in the past, so 'start' should be in past tense 'started'. This is a past tense error (ID 5).

× I did not get the access for library when I was a child, but my father used to buy me some historical books and story quality from the book shops and bookmarkets.

✓ I did not get access to the library when I was a child, but my father used to buy me some historical books and story books from the bookshops and bookstores.

The phrase 'get the access for library' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'get access to the library'. Also, 'story quality' is incorrect; likely meant 'story books'. 'Book shops' and 'bookmarkets' should be 'bookshops' and 'bookstores'. These are preposition and word choice errors (ID 11 and 13).

× I am not familiar with any Chinese kids, but if I have to answer this question, I would say that they are quite familiar to go to the library because they are educational system is very high higher so.

✓ I am not familiar with any Chinese kids, but if I have to answer this question, I would say that they are quite familiar with going to the library because their educational system is very advanced.

The phrase 'they are quite familiar to go' is incorrect; it should be 'familiar with going'. Also, 'they are educational system' is incorrect; it should be 'their educational system'. 'Very high higher' is redundant and incorrect; 'very advanced' is better. These are pronoun and adjective errors (ID 12 and 13).