Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Start with a clear direct answer, use correct tense and article usage, and make sentences concise. Organize into 2–3 sentences: a topic sentence answering the question and 1–2 supporting details (when/why and what you read). Use linking words like “because” or “so” correctly and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: I used to go to the library regularly when I was at college because it was on campus and very convenient. There I read a mix of fiction and non‑fiction, and I also borrowed many course textbooks to help with my studies.

Sugestão: Give a concise topic sentence about your main activity, then add 1–2 specific supporting details with correct verb forms and fewer fillers. Use linking words (for example, “so”, “to”, “for example”) appropriately and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: I usually study quietly and complete course assignments in the library because it is a peaceful place. For example, I use reference books and academic articles there to support research projects and to find reliable information.

Sugestão: Answer directly and then explain briefly with clear tense and fewer hesitations. Be specific about timing and routine (e.g., grade, how often, what you did) and avoid fillers like “like” and repeated words.

Exemplo: No, there was no public library in my small village when I was a child. I first used a library around eighth grade, when my school opened one and allowed us an hour each week to borrow books and study.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear general statement, then give specific reasons and examples. Use plural/singular and article forms correctly, avoid repetition, and link ideas with words like “for example” or “because”.

Exemplo: Yes, many Chinese children visit libraries regularly because they are quiet and comfortable places to study. For example, students often go with classmates to do homework, prepare for exams or entrance tests, and discuss study materials together.

× Yes, before I go to library, not now but because the library was in my college now I had completed my studies.

✓ Yes, I used to go to the library before; not now, because it was in my college and I have completed my studies.

Incorrect or missing articles 'the' before 'library' and awkward tense sequence. Use 'the library' for a specific library and 'used to' to indicate past habit; use present perfect 'have completed' to show completion relevant to now.

× But when I go to college I read many books.

✓ But when I went to college I read many books.

The action refers to a past habitual situation, so simple past 'went' is appropriate rather than present 'go'.

× There are many fictional or non fictional books are available.

✓ There are many fictional and non-fictional books available.

Redundant use of 'are' and incorrect connector 'or' for contrasting categories. Remove the second 'are' and use 'and' plus hyphenate 'non-fictional'.

× Not only these books but also a many my course related books are also available there.

✓ Not only these books but also many of my course-related books are available there.

Incorrect use of 'a many' and word order. Use 'many of my course-related books' and hyphenate the compound adjective 'course-related'. Remove redundant 'also' and second 'are'.

× Because there is a silence so that's why I'll go over there to complete my work related to my course or if I wanted to re do research on my work so I I can easily find many books related to that which which which makes my work easy to find many important articles.

✓ Because it is quiet there, I go to the library to complete coursework or to do research; I can easily find many relevant books and important articles.

Awkward 'there is a silence' and redundant 'so that's why'. Tense mismatch: use present habitual 'I go' not future 'I'll go' when describing usual behavior. 'If I wanted to re do' should be 'to do research' or 'if I want to do research'. Remove repeated words and simplify sentence structure.

× No I didn't go when I was kid in the library because I was in a small village in my hometown and there was no library.

✓ No, I didn't go to a library when I was a kid because I lived in a small village and there was no library.

Missing 'to' after 'go', missing article 'a' before 'kid', and awkward phrasing 'in my hometown'. Use 'lived' for location in past and include articles correctly.

× When I was like in 8th or 9th class in my school the the school opened a library and at that time it they also open us for one period like one hour and.

✓ When I was in 8th or 9th grade the school opened a library and allowed us one period, about one hour, to use it.

Redundant words ('the the', 'it they'), incorrect verb 'open us' and awkward 'like'. Use 'grade' not 'class' for clarity, 'allowed us one period' and remove trailing 'and'.

× Yes, they often go to libraries because they are fun.

✓ Yes, they often go to libraries because they are enjoyable or fun.

'They are fun' is acceptable but ambiguous; 'libraries are enjoyable' is clearer. Adjust phrasing to refer to libraries rather than children.

× It is a quiet area they they go with their friends like their classmates.

✓ Libraries are quiet places; they go with friends, such as classmates.

Pronoun 'It' is unclear; better to use 'Libraries' as subject. Remove duplicate 'they' and use plural 'places'.

× They go to over there to studies like their homeworks or for their exams or entrance exams and they share their information or knowledge with each other.

✓ They go there to study, to do their homework, or to prepare for exams or entrance exams, and they share information and knowledge with each other.

Incorrect preposition 'to over there'—use 'there' or 'to the library'; 'studies' should be verb 'study'; 'homeworks' is uncountable 'homework'. Simplify and correct parallel structure.'