Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., "Yes, I went to the library often when I was at university."). Use correct verb forms and articles, avoid redundancy, and keep to 2–4 concise sentences. Add one specific detail (when, how often, or what you did there) and use linking words (because, so) correctly.

Exemplo: Yes, I went to the library often when I was at university because my teachers recommended books we couldn't afford. So my friends and I borrowed books, took detailed notes there, and studied together most afternoons.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear topic sentence describing your usual activities (e.g., "I usually read and take notes at the library"). Use correct tense and avoid vague modal verbs. Give one or two specific supporting details (what you read, when, or how you study) and link them logically with words like "because" or "so".

Exemplo: I usually read textbooks and take notes at the library because it is quieter than home. In my first year I chose the library every evening to concentrate on assignments and group projects.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear past-tense statement and one concise reason. Avoid awkward phrasing and repetition; explain feelings with specific vocabulary (e.g., "too quiet" or "boring"). Keep to 2–3 sentences and use linking words such as "because".

Exemplo: Yes, I visited the library with my father several times when I was a child, but I did not enjoy it because it was too quiet and felt boring. I preferred noisy places where I could play.

Sugestão: Avoid overgeneralization and hedging. Start with a brief cautious statement if unsure (e.g., "I'm not sure, but I think...") then give a reasoned opinion with one specific detail. Use clearer vocabulary (e.g., "studious" instead of "powerful") and smoother linking words such as "because" or "so".

Exemplo: I'm not certain, but I think many Chinese children are studious and often visit libraries because education is highly valued. For example, they may use libraries after school to borrow books and do homework.

× Yes, I used to go library very often when I was a student of university because our teachers suggested us to bought some books, but we are not able to afford all of those books.

✓ Yes, I used to go to the library very often when I was a university student because our teachers suggested that we buy some books, but we were not able to afford all of those books.

Errors: missing preposition 'to' before 'library' and incorrect article use; 'student of university' is unnatural, use 'university student'; 'suggested us to bought' mixes structures and tense—use 'suggested that we buy' or 'suggested we buy' (subjunctive/simple present), and 'bought' is wrong form; 'are not able' should be past 'were not able' to match past time. Suggestion: Use correct prepositions and articles, maintain consistent past tense, and use correct verb forms after 'suggest'.

× That's why we are some friends decided that we will go to library and take notes from there and we will study.

✓ That's why some of us decided that we would go to the library, take notes there, and study.

Errors: awkward word order 'we are some friends decided' and inconsistent tense/modal ('decided' + 'we will' should be 'would'); missing article 'the' before 'library'; repetitive 'from there' unnecessary. Suggestion: Use natural subject order, keep past perspective with 'decided' + 'would', and include articles.

× Library is a place where everyone go for collecting books or study there and it is also true for me.

✓ The library is a place where everyone goes to get books or study, and it is true for me too.

Errors: missing definite article 'the' before 'library'; subject-verb agreement 'everyone go' should be 'everyone goes'; incorrect verb phrases 'go for collecting' and 'study there'—use 'go to get books' or 'go to borrow books' and 'study'; word order 'also true for me' better as 'true for me too'. Suggestion: Use 'the library', match verb to singular 'everyone', and use natural verb collocations.

× When I was a student of first year then I cannot find any peaceful place where I can continue my study.

✓ When I was a first-year student, I could not find any peaceful place where I could continue my studies.

Errors: tense mismatch—'was' indicates past so use 'could not' instead of 'cannot'; 'student of first year' should be 'first-year student'; 'study' as noun count uses plural 'studies' or 'my studying'. Suggestion: Keep past tense consistently and use correct noun form.

× That time I decided that I may go, I might go.

✓ At that time I decided that I might go.

Errors: mixing modals 'may' and 'might' redundantly; after a past verb like 'decided' use 'might' to indicate past possibility. Suggestion: Choose a single appropriate modal and keep tense consistent.

× To be honest, yes, I used to go to library with my father several times, but I did not like the environment of library because it was so calm and cool that time.

✓ To be honest, yes, I used to go to the library with my father several times, but I did not like the library's atmosphere because it was so calm and quiet then.

Errors: missing 'the' before 'library'; repetitive 'environment of library' better as 'library's atmosphere' or 'environment'; 'cool' likely incorrect collocation—use 'quiet' for atmosphere; 'that time' better as 'then'. Suggestion: Use articles, natural collocations for atmosphere, and appropriate temporal adverbs.

× I thought that why the environment is so like that, it's boring, I don't.

✓ I wondered why the environment was like that; I thought it was boring and that I did not enjoy it.

Errors: incorrect word order for indirect question—'I thought why...' should be 'I wondered why...'; tense consistency—use past 'was'; incomplete clause 'I don't' is unfinished and mismatched tense. Suggestion: Use 'wondered' for indirect questions, maintain past tense, and finish thoughts fully.

× Actually, I have no extensive knowledge about Chinese kids, but I think, uh, they are so powerful and their love to gather knowledge.

✓ Actually, I do not have extensive knowledge about Chinese children, but I think they are very studious and love to gain knowledge.

Errors: 'kids' is informal; 'they are so powerful' is incorrect collocation—'studious' or 'eager to learn' fits; 'their love to gather knowledge' wrong pronoun/structure—use 'they love to gain knowledge' or 'they have a strong desire to learn'. Suggestion: Use appropriate nouns and collocations and clear pronoun references.

× That's why I'm sure about that.

✓ That's why I'm sure of that.

Errors: preposition choice—'sure about that' is not wrong but 'sure of that' or better 'I'm sure of it' is more natural; original also a bit awkward. Suggestion: Use 'sure of it' or rephrase to 'I'm sure' without 'about'.

× And they very often go to library and collect it, uh, some books and study.

✓ And they very often go to the library, borrow some books, and study.

Errors: missing article 'the' before 'library'; awkward 'collect it, uh, some books' — 'collect some books' or better 'borrow some books'; filler 'uh' should be removed in formal sentences. Suggestion: Use 'the library', correct verb 'borrow' or 'get', and clean sentence structure.