Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "to keep because there's a lot to choose from" which is unclear. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide a clearer reason for buying shoes frequently.

Exemplo: Yes, I love buying shoes because they can really change how an outfit looks. I usually buy new pairs every month since there are always new styles available.

Sugestão: Your answer has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases, such as "I'd like to try them and in stores" and "fill the material." Try to use correct expressions and linking words to make your answer more natural and coherent. Also, explain your reasons more clearly.

Exemplo: No, I haven't bought shoes online because I prefer trying them on in stores to make sure they fit well. I also like to feel the material before making a purchase.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but you can improve coherence by using linking words and adding a concluding sentence. Also, try to vary your vocabulary a bit more to sound natural.

Exemplo: I usually spend quite a bit on shoes because I buy different pairs for work, sports, and parties. Since shoes are an important part of fashion, I like to keep up with the latest trends to match my outfits.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing, such as "casual out outings either comfortable shoes" and "a special occasions." Use linking words to improve flow and correct grammar to sound more natural.

Exemplo: It depends on the situation. For work or casual outings, I usually prefer comfortable shoes, but for special occasions, I choose fashionable ones. I always try to balance comfort and style.

× I buy shoes every month to keep because there's a lot to choose from.

✓ I buy shoes every month to keep up because there's a lot to choose from.

The original sentence is missing the phrase 'up' after 'keep' to complete the expression 'keep up,' which means to stay current or updated. Without 'up,' the sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'up' corrects the sentence structure and clarifies the meaning.

× I'd like to try them and in stores to make sure they fit well.

✓ I'd like to try them in stores to make sure they fit well.

The phrase 'try them and in stores' is incorrect because 'and' is unnecessary and disrupts the sentence structure. The correct sentence should be 'try them in stores' to indicate the location where the student wants to try the shoes. Removing 'and' fixes the sentence structure error.

× I also like to fill the material before buying.

✓ I also like to feel the material before buying.

The verb 'fill' is incorrectly used here; the correct verb is 'feel' when referring to touching or sensing the material. This is a common confusion between similar-sounding words. Using 'feel' correctly conveys the intended meaning of checking the material's texture before purchase.

× For work or casual out outings either comfortable shoes but for a special occasions I choose fashionable ones.

✓ For work or casual outings, I prefer comfortable shoes, but for special occasions, I choose fashionable ones.

The original sentence has multiple issues: 'out outings' is redundant, 'either' is misplaced, and the sentence lacks proper conjunctions and punctuation. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical correctness. The revised sentence properly connects ideas and uses correct prepositions and articles.