Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói về sở thích mua giày và tần suất mua một cách mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I really like buying shoes, but since I don't have much money, I only buy a pair about once a year.

Sugestão: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu rõ ràng hơn. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và nói rõ trải nghiệm mua giày online của bạn. Sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online through an app. It was an interesting experience because I was quite surprised by the good quality of the shoes.

Sugestão: Bạn nên nói rõ số tiền và ý nghĩa của nó trong câu hoàn chỉnh. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sắp xếp câu hợp lý để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Exemplo: I usually spend about 1,000,000 Vietnamese dong on shoes, which I think is a reasonable price for comfortable and good quality shoes.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và logic hơn. Bạn nên giải thích lý do chọn giày thời trang hoặc thoải mái một cách mạch lạc, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng câu hoàn chỉnh.

Exemplo: If I have to choose, I prefer fashionable shoes because even if they are a bit uncomfortable, I want people to notice my style.

× About one year I buy one shoes.

✓ About one year I buy one pair of shoes.

The word 'shoes' is plural and needs a quantifier like 'pair' when referring to a single unit. 'One shoes' is incorrect; it should be 'one pair of shoes'. This clarifies the quantity and is grammatically correct.

× I have a posture online in application in my form.

✓ I have placed an order online through an application on my phone.

The word 'posture' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is likely 'placed an order'. The past participle 'placed' is needed to form the present perfect tense 'have placed'. Also, 'in my form' is unclear and corrected to 'on my phone' for clarity.

× That is a interesting experience.

✓ That is an interesting experience.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'interesting'. Using 'an' is the correct article usage here.

× I quite shocked about quality of shoes.

✓ I was quite shocked by the quality of the shoes.

The verb 'shocked' requires the preposition 'by' to indicate the cause. Also, 'about' is incorrect here. Additionally, the sentence needs the past tense 'was' to be grammatically correct.

× It's very good.

✓ They are very good.

Referring to 'shoes' which is plural, the pronoun should be 'they' and the verb 'are' to agree in number.

× I usually afford 1,000,000 Vietnam to shoes.

✓ I usually spend 1,000,000 Vietnamese dong on shoes.

The verb 'afford' is incorrectly used; 'spend' is appropriate for money usage. Also, the currency name should be 'Vietnamese dong' and the preposition 'on' is correct for spending money on something.

× It is a good price for.

✓ It is a good price.

The phrase 'for' is incomplete and unnecessary here. The sentence should end after 'price' to be grammatically correct.

× Shoe with a good quality, good price, I can buy a comfortable shoes.

✓ Shoes with good quality and good price, I can buy comfortable shoes.

'Shoe' should be plural 'shoes' to match the context. Also, 'a comfortable shoes' is incorrect; 'comfortable shoes' without 'a' is correct because 'shoes' is plural.

× If I have to choose one, I will choose fashionable shoes because I can suffer uncomfortable but I want to anyone.

✓ If I have to choose one, I will choose fashionable shoes because I can tolerate discomfort but I want to impress others.

The modal verb 'can' is used correctly but 'suffer uncomfortable' is incorrect; it should be 'tolerate discomfort'. Also, 'I want to anyone' is unclear and corrected to 'I want to impress others' for meaning and grammar.

× Have to look at my shoes.

✓ People have to look at my shoes.

The sentence lacks a subject. Adding 'People' clarifies who has to look at the shoes, making the sentence complete and grammatically correct.