Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to be more concise and directly answer the question. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be specific about your shopping habits. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are natural and grammatically correct.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy buying shoes and usually do so once a month. I like to buy shoes in different colours because they boost my confidence. For example, I often shop on Amazon since they offer a wide variety of colours to choose from.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and incomplete, with several grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly and clearly, using correct sentence structures. Provide specific details and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I have definitely bought shoes online because it is comfortable and convenient. For example, I usually buy from well-known websites where I can easily find the styles I like.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and incomplete. Try to be more concise and clear, directly stating your budget and reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid filler words like 'umm'.

Exemplo: I usually set aside about $100 each month for buying shoes because I enjoy purchasing them from different stores. This budget helps me manage my expenses effectively.

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use more natural expressions and correct grammar. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I prefer wearing comfortable shoes because they help me feel relaxed during activities. For instance, I always choose comfortable shoes when I go hiking to make my trip more enjoyable and cheerful.

× Well I really enjoy buying shoes especially one month at a time because I really like buying the different color of shoes that make me confident.

✓ Well I really enjoy buying shoes especially one month at a time because I really like buying the different colours of shoes that make me confident.

The word 'color' should be plural 'colours' because it refers to multiple types of shoe colours. In English, when talking about more than one type or variety, the plural form is used.

× For example, I usually buy inches from Amazon because they have a lot of color to choosing.

✓ For example, I usually buy shoes from Amazon because they have a lot of colours to choose from.

The phrase 'a lot of color to choosing' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'a lot of colours to choose from'. Also, 'inches' seems to be a mishearing or typo for 'shoes'. The preposition 'from' is used after 'choose' to indicate the source or options.

× Well, definitely I have bought a choose from the online because it's give me, it helps it give me comfortable and convenient when I choose, uh, when when I choose to buying uh, shoes, for example, I usually buy from.

✓ Well, definitely I have bought shoes online because it gives me comfort and convenience when I choose to buy shoes. For example, I usually buy from...

The word 'choose' is incorrect here; it should be 'shoes' (plural noun). Also, 'it's give me' should be 'it gives me' to agree with the singular subject. 'Comfortable' is an adjective; the noun 'comfort' is appropriate here. 'Convenient' should be 'convenience' as a noun. The phrase 'choose to buying' is incorrect; it should be 'choose to buy'.

× Well, I have a budget around $100 for buying shoes every month because, umm, I really enjoy buying shoes, uh, from a different place. So I, I need to umm, separate the money for buy shoes. For example, I cut off $100 for my.

✓ Well, I have a budget of around $100 for buying shoes every month because I really enjoy buying shoes from different places. So, I need to separate the money to buy shoes. For example, I set aside $100 for my shoes.

The phrase 'separate the money for buy shoes' is incorrect; it should be 'separate the money to buy shoes' using the infinitive form after 'to'. 'Cut off' is not appropriate here; 'set aside' or 'allocate' is better for budgeting. Also, 'from a different place' should be plural 'from different places' to indicate multiple sources.

× Well, I prefer wearing comfortable shoes because it gives me comfortable and relax when I do activity.

✓ Well, I prefer wearing comfortable shoes because they make me feel comfortable and relaxed when I do activities.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect when referring to 'shoes' which is plural; 'they' should be used. Also, 'gives me comfortable and relax' is incorrect; it should be 'make me feel comfortable and relaxed' to use the correct adjectives and verb forms. 'Activity' should be plural 'activities' to generalise.

× Let's makemytrip more enjoyable and cheerful.

✓ Let's make my trip more enjoyable and cheerful.

The phrase 'makemytrip' is a typo or incorrect compound; it should be separated as 'make my trip'. Proper spacing is necessary for clarity and correct sentence structure.