Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: English (Nepal): Tapai ko uttar ma thap spashta ra sanga-sanga shabda prayog garnu parcha. Tapai le prashna ko pratyaksha uttar dinu parcha ra thap bibaran haru jodne bela ma linking words jastai 'because', 'so' ko prayog garera uttar lai prabhavit ra sahaj banau. Aba ko uttar ma kehi shabda haru galat chhan ra sentence structure pani thik chhaina, jasle gardai uttar prabhavit hudaina.

Exemplo: I like buying shoes, but not very often because one pair usually lasts me six to eight months. So, I only buy new shoes when my old ones are worn out.

Sugestão: English (Nepal): Tapai ko uttar ma grammar ra shabda prayog ma sudhar garnu parcha. Sentence haru lai chhoto ra spashta banau, ra linking words jastai 'but', 'so' ko prayog garera uttar lai logical banaunu parcha. Aba ko uttar ma repetition ra galti haru chan, jasle gardai uttar prabhavit hudaina.

Exemplo: I used to buy shoes online, but once I received a defective pair and they refused to refund me, so I stopped buying shoes online.

Sugestão: English (Nepal): Tapai ko uttar ma clarity ra shabda prayog ma sudhar garnu parcha. Tapai le prashna ko pratyaksha uttar dinu parcha ra thap bibaran haru jodne bela ma linking words jastai 'if', 'because' ko prayog garera uttar lai prabhavit ra sahaj banau. Aba ko uttar ma kehi shabda haru galat chhan ra sentence structure pani thik chhaina, jasle gardai uttar prabhavit hudaina.

Exemplo: The amount I spend on shoes depends on the type. For comfortable or casual shoes, I usually spend up to ₹5000. But for parties, I buy more expensive shoes because I want to look good.

Sugestão: English (Nepal): Tapai ko uttar ma grammar ra repetition ma sudhar garnu parcha. Sentence haru lai chhoto ra spashta banau, ra linking words jastai 'because', 'so' ko prayog garera uttar lai logical banaunu parcha. Aba ko uttar ma kehi shabda haru dohrayeko chha ra grammar thik chhaina.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes for daily wear because they are practical. However, for parties or special events, I choose fashionable shoes to look stylish.

× buying a shoes buying more shoes means very impractical because one soup can last me for six to 8-8 months

✓ buying shoes means very impractical because one pair can last me for six to eight months

The word 'shoes' is plural and should not be preceded by 'a'. Also, 'soup' is a typo and should be 'pair' to correctly refer to shoes. Use 'shoes' without 'a' and 'pair' to indicate a set of shoes.

× after the my original shoes has been worn out

✓ after my original shoes have been worn out

The subject 'shoes' is plural, so the verb should be 'have' instead of 'has'. Also, 'the my' is incorrect; only 'my' is needed.

× when I buy a shoes from online

✓ when I buy shoes online

'Shoes' is plural and should not be preceded by 'a'. Also, 'from online' is incorrect; 'online' alone suffices.

× they not they did not want it to refund

✓ they did not want to refund it

The phrase is awkward and incorrect. The correct modal verb usage is 'did not want to refund it' to express refusal.

× buying buying shoes from the shoes online

✓ buying shoes online

Redundant repetition of 'buying' and 'shoes' is incorrect. Simplify to 'buying shoes online'.

× It usually depends upon the what type of sausage ionem buying

✓ It usually depends on what type of shoes I am buying

The correct preposition is 'depends on' not 'depends upon'. Also, 'sausage ionem' is a typo and should be 'shoes I am'.

× If ionem buying a comfortable or casual wear

✓ If I am buying comfortable or casual wear

'ionem' is a typo for 'I am'. Also, 'a comfortable or casual wear' is incorrect because 'wear' is uncountable here.

× I tend to buy it within a 500 within ₹5000

✓ I tend to buy them within ₹5000

'It' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'shoes'. Also, 'within a 500' is unclear and redundant.

× If I am going to a party or a party where I use lay by, little bit expensive because then a little bit expensive because I can wear it

✓ If I am going to a party or an event where I want to look good, I buy a little bit more expensive shoes because I can wear them

Sentence is unclear and repetitive. 'Lay by' is incorrect here. Also, 'it' should be 'them' for plural shoes.

× I think it's depend upon the occasion

✓ I think it depends on the occasion

The verb 'depend' should be in third person singular present tense 'depends' to agree with 'it'. Also, 'depend on' is the correct preposition.

× I tend to tend to wear fashionable shoes

✓ I tend to wear fashionable shoes

Redundant repetition of 'tend to' is incorrect.

× So I think it depend upon the program or the event, not just the person itself

✓ So I think it depends on the program or the event, not just the person

The verb 'depend' should be 'depends' to agree with 'it'. Also, 'depend on' is the correct preposition. 'Itself' is unnecessary here.