Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答に多くのためらいや繰り返しがあり、流暢さが低いです。より自然で効果的な答えを作るために、話す前に簡単に考え、簡潔に答える練習をしましょう。また、文法的に正しい表現を使い、冗長な部分を避けることが重要です。

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes because they help me complete my outfits. I usually buy new shoes about once every few months.

Sugestão: 文法の誤りと不自然な表現が目立ちます。特に、動詞の形や前置詞の使い方に注意しましょう。また、理由を述べる際に、接続詞を使って論理的に話す練習をすると良いです。

Exemplo: I haven't bought shoes online because my feet are quite small, so it's difficult to find the right fit without trying them on. Therefore, I prefer to shop in physical stores.

Sugestão: 答えが不明瞭で、文法的な誤りも多いです。具体的な金額を明確に述べ、文を簡潔にまとめる練習をしましょう。また、単語の発音や選択にも注意が必要です。

Exemplo: The amount I spend on shoes depends on the type. For example, I usually pay around ¥10,000 for sneakers, but sandals are usually cheaper.

Sugestão: 繰り返しや言い間違いが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。理由を述べる際は、明確で簡潔な表現を使い、接続詞で文をつなげる練習をしましょう。

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes because if shoes are uncomfortable, I can't walk easily. Therefore, I always choose shoes that are comfortable to wear.

× I matched a shoes, I, I buy my shoes, uh, once, uh, once a.

✓ I matched shoes, I buy my shoes once.

The phrase 'a shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural and does not take the singular article 'a'. The correct form is simply 'shoes' without 'a'. Also, the sentence is fragmented and redundant; simplifying it improves clarity.

× I haven't bought my shoes buy online because it my foot is quite small it's really difficult to fit without to try them on.

✓ I haven't bought my shoes online because my foot is quite small and it's really difficult to fit without trying them on.

The phrase 'buy online' is incorrect; 'bought' already implies purchase, so 'buy' is unnecessary. Also, 'without to try' is incorrect; after 'without' the gerund form 'trying' should be used. The sentence also needs conjunctions for clarity.

× So I always go to shop try.

✓ So I always go to the shop to try them on.

The phrase 'go to shop' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'shop'. Also, 'try' needs to be in the infinitive form 'to try' and 'them on' clarifies what is being tried.

× I think it depend on the, uh, how much type of shoes.

✓ I think it depends on the type of shoes.

The verb 'depend' should be 'depends' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'how much type' is incorrect; 'type' is countable, so 'how many types' or simply 'the type' is appropriate.

× But if I buy Sunder, uh, it's really close.

✓ But if I buy sandals, uh, they're really close.

The word 'Sunder' seems to be a mispronunciation or misspelling of 'sandals', which is plural. Also, 'it's' (it is) should be 'they're' (they are) to agree with the plural noun 'sandals'.

× I prefer comfortable shoes because, uh, it's not uncomfortable shoes.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because uncomfortable shoes are not comfortable.

The phrase 'it's not uncomfortable shoes' is incorrect because 'it's' refers to singular, but 'shoes' is plural. The sentence is also contradictory; rephrasing clarifies the meaning.

× I always tended to choose a comfortable shoes.

✓ I always tend to choose comfortable shoes.

The phrase 'a comfortable shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural and cannot take the singular article 'a'. Also, 'tended' suggests past habit; 'tend' is better for present habitual action.