Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cevabınız doğal ancak tekrar eden ifadeler var ve cümle yapısı biraz karışık. Daha net ve akıcı cümleler kurmaya çalışın. Ayrıca, cevaplarınızı 5 cümleyi geçmeden, doğrudan soruya yanıt vererek ve destekleyici detaylar ekleyerek geliştirin.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes, but because they are quite expensive, I only buy them about once every six months. I prefer to save money and buy quality shoes rather than many pairs. This way, I can ensure they last longer and are comfortable.

Sugestão: Cümlenizde tekrarlar ve dilbilgisi hataları mevcut. Cümlelerinizi daha akıcı ve doğru yapıda kurmaya özen gösterin. Ayrıca, bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlenizi daha mantıklı ve tutarlı hale getirin.

Exemplo: Yes, I bought a pair of heels online about eight months ago. Although they looked exactly like the pictures on the website, unfortunately, they were not comfortable to walk in.

Sugestão: Cevabınızda anlam belirsizliği ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Cümlelerinizi daha açık ve mantıklı şekilde kurmaya çalışın. Ayrıca, cevaplarınızı destekleyici detaylarla zenginleştirin ve gereksiz tekrarları önleyin.

Exemplo: I usually don't spend a lot on shoes. It depends on the type; for example, I spend more on sports shoes because I use them often, but I spend less on heels since I wear them less frequently.

Sugestão: Cümlenizde anlam bütünlüğü ve akıcılık eksikliği var. Gereksiz duraklamalar ve tamamlanmamış cümleler var. Cevabınızı daha net ve tutarlı yapmaya çalışın, ayrıca bağlaçlar kullanarak düşüncelerinizi bağlayın.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes because comfort is very important to me. However, fashionable shoes look more attractive, and I used to wear them every day when I was at university. Now, I choose comfort over fashion.

× I like buying shoes, but since they are so expensive I get that chance very rarely, maybe once in in six months.

✓ I like buying shoes, but since they are so expensive I get that chance very rarely, maybe once in six months.

There is a repeated word 'in' which is a typographical error. Removing the duplicate 'in' corrects the sentence.

× Yes I did, I bought one of my heels or like 8 months ago and actually it looked like what what it seems in online websites on online website but turns out it's not comfortable to walk in.

✓ Yes I did, I bought one of my heels about 8 months ago and actually it looked like what it seemed on online websites but it turned out it wasn't comfortable to walk in.

The sentence has tense inconsistency and repetition. 'What what' is repeated and should be 'what'. 'Seems' should be past tense 'seemed' to match the past event. 'On online website' should be 'on online websites' for plural and correct preposition. 'Turns out' should be past tense 'turned out' to match the past context.

× Yes I did, I bought one of my heels or like 8 months ago and actually it looked like what what it seems in online websites on online website but turns out it's not comfortable to walk in.

✓ Yes I did, I bought one of my heels about 8 months ago and actually it looked like what it seemed on online websites but it turned out it wasn't comfortable to walk in.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'online websites'; the correct preposition is 'on' because we say 'on websites'. Also, 'on online website' is singular and inconsistent; 'websites' plural is better here.

× I don't. I can't say that I spent much, but it depends on the model of the shoe, because if I want to support shoes, I spend more, but if I want to, If I want heels, I don't really spend that much because obviously I want.

✓ I don't. I can't say that I spend much, but it depends on the model of the shoe, because if I want to support shoes, I spend more, but if I want heels, I don't really spend that much because obviously I want.

The verb 'spent' is past tense but the context is about usual spending habits, so present tense 'spend' is correct. Also, the sentence is incomplete at the end; 'because obviously I want' is unclear and should be completed or removed for clarity.

× I don't. I can't say that I spent much, but it depends on the model of the shoe, because if I want to support shoes, I spend more, but if I want to, If I want heels, I don't really spend that much because obviously I want.

✓ I don't. I can't say that I spend much, but it depends on the model of the shoe, because if I want to support shoes, I spend more, but if I want heels, I don't really spend that much.

The sentence is incomplete and has redundant phrases ('if I want to, If I want heels'). Removing the redundant phrase and completing the sentence improves clarity and structure.

× I prefer comfortable shoes because I want to be comfortable obviously, but basically fashionable shoes, uh, looks more fascinating.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because I want to be comfortable obviously, but basically fashionable shoes, uh, look more fascinating.

The subject 'fashionable shoes' is plural, so the verb should be 'look' instead of 'looks' to agree in number.

× So I wanted to wear them every day when I was in university, but now I don't. I am.

✓ So I wanted to wear them every day when I was in university, but now I don't.

The phrase 'I am' at the end is incomplete and unclear. Removing it corrects the sentence. The rest is correct past and present tense usage.