ShoesPart 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Do you like buying shoes? How often?

Candidato

Yes, I often buy shoes once a month and I usually select a select them according to its color and size. I prefer to selecting the black shoes.

Examinador

Have you ever bought shoes online?

Candidato

Yes, I always bought shoes online because I think it cannot need to go outdoors to buy it and eat comfortable for my life.

Examinador

How much money do you usually spend on shoes?

Candidato

I often spend on shoes from 400 to ¥600 which can be able to afford according my week.

Examinador

Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?

Candidato

I prefer comfortable shoes because I usually go work by bus and the comfortable shoes can make me feel relaxed and work long time.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.0Fluência e coerência: 5.5Pronúncia: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso lexical: 5.0

Part 1

Do you like buying shoes? How often?

Pontuação: 60.0

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和重复表达,建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并注意时态和动词形式的正确使用。

Exemplo: Yes, I like buying shoes and usually buy a pair once a month. I choose them based on color and size, and I prefer black shoes.

Have you ever bought shoes online?

Pontuação: 50.0

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和表达方式,明确说明网上购物的便利性。

Exemplo: Yes, I often buy shoes online because it is convenient and I don't need to go outside, which makes my life easier.

How much money do you usually spend on shoes?

Pontuação: 55.0

Sugestão: 回答中语法和表达不准确,建议使用正确的句型表达价格范围,并说明预算来源。

Exemplo: I usually spend between 400 and 600 yuan on shoes, which fits within my weekly budget.

Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?

Pontuação: 65.0

Sugestão: 回答表达基本清楚,但语法和用词有待改进。建议使用更自然的表达方式,并注意句子流畅性。

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes because I usually take the bus to work, and comfortable shoes help me feel relaxed and work longer.

Gramática

Verb + -ing form

× I prefer to selecting the black shoes.

I prefer selecting the black shoes.

动词prefer后面接动名词形式(-ing),而不是不定式to + 动词原形。这里应使用selecting。

Past tense issue

× I always bought shoes online because I think it cannot need to go outdoors to buy it and eat comfortable for my life.

I always buy shoes online because I think I don't need to go outdoors to buy them and it is comfortable for my life.

句子中时态不一致,前半句用过去时bought不合适,应使用一般现在时buy,因为表达的是习惯行为。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I always bought shoes online because I think it cannot need to go outdoors to buy it and eat comfortable for my life.

I always buy shoes online because I think I don't need to go outdoors to buy them and it is comfortable for my life.

代词使用错误,shoes是复数,应该用复数代词them代替it。

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× I often spend on shoes from 400 to ¥600 which can be able to afford according my week.

I often spend from ¥400 to ¥600 on shoes, which I can afford according to my weekly budget.

表达金额范围时应使用from...to结构,且介词使用错误,应该用according to。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I often spend on shoes from 400 to ¥600 which can be able to afford according my week.

I often spend from ¥400 to ¥600 on shoes, which I can afford according to my weekly budget.

介词使用错误,应该用according to表示“根据”。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I prefer comfortable shoes because I usually go work by bus and the comfortable shoes can make me feel relaxed and work long time.

I prefer comfortable shoes because I usually go to work by bus and comfortable shoes can make me feel relaxed and work for a long time.

go后面需要加介词to表示去某地,且表达持续时间时应加介词for。

Vocabulário

ComfortablePleasant; Cozy; Loose; Leisurely
LongLengthy; Soon; Yearn for
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