Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: My brother, your answer no too clear and e get some grammar wahala. Try to answer the question directly and use simple, correct sentences. Also, avoid repeating words and explain your reasons clearly. For example, talk about how often you buy shoes and why you like or dislike it.

Exemplo: I don't like buying shoes very often because I prefer to use shoes that last long. Usually, I buy shoes once or twice a year because I want to save money and avoid wasting shoes quickly.

Sugestão: You need to make your answer more organized and clear. Use linking words like 'but' or 'because' properly to connect your ideas. Also, try to explain your reasons in a simple and direct way without repeating words.

Exemplo: No, I have never bought shoes online. Sometimes I think about ordering online, but I don't because I worry about the delivery and I cannot pay immediately.

Sugestão: Your answer is not very clear and has some grammar mistakes. Try to answer directly how much you spend and explain why. Use linking words like 'because' to connect your ideas and avoid unnecessary words.

Exemplo: I usually don't spend much money on shoes because I prefer to buy other things. I am okay with having just one pair of shoes and slippers.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and incomplete. Try to answer directly which type of shoes you prefer and explain why. Use correct vocabulary and complete your sentences fully.

Exemplo: I prefer shoes that are both fashionable and comfortable because they help me look good and feel good at the same time.

× I don't like her buying shoes.

✓ I don't like buying shoes.

The pronoun 'her' is incorrectly used here. The speaker intends to express a dislike for the action of buying shoes, not about 'her' buying shoes. Removing 'her' corrects the sentence.

× I prefer a building shoe consumer cause uh building shoe will be last longer than buying the homemade shoe.

✓ I prefer buying shoes because bought shoes will last longer than homemade shoes.

The phrase 'building shoe consumer' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is about buying shoes. Also, 'building shoe' should be 'bought shoes' or 'purchased shoes'. The sentence is corrected to express preference for buying shoes as they last longer than homemade ones.

× No, I have never thought of buying shoes online or but sometimes it came to my mind to to buy to order for sure online but I couldn't make it due to the delivery or the payment of the money so I cannot deposit immediately.

✓ No, I have never thought of buying shoes online, but sometimes it comes to my mind to order online. However, I couldn't do it because of delivery or payment issues, so I cannot pay immediately.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. 'Came' should be 'comes' to match the present perfect 'have never thought'. Also, 'couldn't make it' is vague; 'couldn't do it' is clearer. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct tense usage.

× I don't like to be spending much money on school 'cause I I will buy some other thing.

✓ I don't like to spend much money on shoes because I will buy other things.

The preposition 'on school' is incorrect; it should be 'on shoes'. Also, 'to be spending' is unnecessarily complex; 'to spend' is better. 'Some other thing' is better as 'other things' for generality.

× So inasmuch I get only one shoe and slippers, it is OK for me.

✓ So as long as I get only one pair of shoes and slippers, it is OK for me.

'One shoe and slippers' is inconsistent; 'one pair of shoes' is the correct singular form for shoes. 'Inasmuch' is incorrectly used; 'as long as' fits better here.

× It is pretty. It is pretty well for a man to be using fashionable shoes and comfortable shoes.

✓ It is good. It is pretty good for a man to wear fashionable and comfortable shoes.

'Pretty well' is an adverb phrase and incorrectly used here; 'pretty good' (adjective) fits better. Also, 'to be using' is awkward; 'to wear' is more natural.

× I think I prefer both using fashionable shoes and convertible shoes.

✓ I think I prefer using both fashionable and comfortable shoes.

'Convertible shoes' is likely a mispronunciation or misuse; 'comfortable shoes' fits the context. Also, 'both using' is awkward; 'using both' is better.