Shoes— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Candidato
I guess purchasing and collecting shoes is actually one of my favorite hobbies and really one of the few items that I really care about in my wardrobe, you could say. Because although I care about my clothes, I just have a very special interest in shoes and sneakers, especially some really good Oxford shoes which look very classy in a formal environment.
Examinador
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Candidato
Yes, I did buy shoes online once but it was not really a good experience for me because although they promised that the shoes would be original, but they ended up becoming a copy product because they really did not have any original barcode on them. So when I went to actually scan it, it didn't show anything which proved that they were fake.
Examinador
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Candidato
My approach to buying shoes is but unique. So instead of buying shoes too frequently, actually save up money to buy a more expensive product because they tend to last longer. My dad once bought a shoe from Korea and it was from Field I believe. It really lasted 7 years of regular use and I was really impressed by it.
Examinador
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Candidato
I have shoes that fall under both of those criterias and it really depends on the situation I'm at and the event I'm attending. Because in a formal event I obviously wouldn't really care about comfort as much as how they look. But I do prefer for daily use shoes that are both good looking and very comfortable to wear.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Pontuação: 75.0Sugestão: Your answer is quite detailed but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to be more concise and directly answer the question first, then add specific details. Also, avoid starting sentences with conjunctions like 'Because'.
Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy buying shoes and do it quite often. I especially like collecting sneakers and Oxford shoes because they look classy and suit formal occasions well.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Pontuação: 80.0Sugestão: Your answer is clear and detailed but a bit long and has some redundancy. Try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent and avoid repeating the same idea.
Exemplo: Yes, I bought shoes online once, but it was disappointing because although they promised original products, the shoes turned out to be fake. For example, they had no original barcode, and when I scanned it, nothing showed up.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific examples with proper linking words. Avoid fragmented sentences.
Exemplo: I usually save money to buy expensive shoes because they last longer. For instance, my dad bought a pair of Field shoes from Korea that lasted seven years with regular use, which impressed me a lot.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Pontuação: 78.0Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be improved by avoiding starting sentences with 'Because' and by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to be more concise.
Exemplo: I prefer both fashionable and comfortable shoes depending on the occasion. For formal events, I focus more on appearance, but for daily use, I choose shoes that are both stylish and comfortable.
Gramática
× Yes, I did buy shoes online once but it was not really a good experience for me because although they promised that the shoes would be original, but they ended up becoming a copy product because they really did not have any original barcode on them.
✓ Yes, I did buy shoes online once, but it was not really a good experience for me because although they promised that the shoes would be original, they ended up becoming a copy product because they really did not have any original barcode on them.
The sentence incorrectly uses both 'because' and 'but' together, which is redundant and grammatically incorrect. In English, coordinating conjunctions like 'but' should not be combined with subordinating conjunctions like 'because' in this way. The correct approach is to remove 'but' after 'because' to maintain proper sentence structure.
× I have shoes that fall under both of those criterias and it really depends on the situation I'm at and the event I'm attending.
✓ I have shoes that fall under both of those criteria and it really depends on the situation I'm at and the event I'm attending.
The word 'criteria' is the plural form of 'criterion'. Using 'criterias' is incorrect because 'criteria' already indicates plural. This is a common mistake in English pluralization. The correct plural form is 'criteria' without an 's' at the end.
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