Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more concise and clear by avoiding redundancy and improving sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and ensure your response directly answers the question with a clear topic sentence.

Exemplo: I like buying shoes, but I don't buy them very often. Usually, I purchase a new pair only when I need one, so I don't keep track of how frequently I buy shoes.

Sugestão: Focus on organizing your answer with clear sentences and avoid filler words. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and provide specific details about your experience.

Exemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online recently. For example, I purchased a pair of Adidas Samba shoes because they were cheaper online than in physical stores, which made online shopping more convenient and affordable for me.

Sugestão: Try to improve fluency by reducing hesitation and repeating words. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide a clear, structured response with specific price ranges.

Exemplo: I usually don't spend too much money on shoes because I consider them a basic necessity. I prefer comfortable shoes priced around $50 to $60, but I am willing to spend up to $100 or $130 if needed.

Sugestão: Work on sentence clarity and grammar to express your opinion more effectively. Use linking words to contrast ideas and provide a clear reason for your preference.

Exemplo: I always prefer comfortable shoes because fashion trends change quickly, but comfort lasts a lifetime. Even if a shoe isn't fashionable, I choose it if it feels good and suits me.

× I'm not a shoe person which often buy every 20 shoes.

✓ I'm not a shoe person who often buys shoes every 20 days.

The relative pronoun 'which' is incorrectly used for people; 'who' should be used instead. Also, 'buy' should be 'buys' to agree with the singular subject 'person' (third person singular). The phrase 'every 20 shoes' is unclear and likely intended to mean 'every 20 days' or a similar time frame, so it was corrected to 'every 20 days' for clarity.

× I recently buy a new pair of shoes online.

✓ I recently bought a new pair of shoes online.

The verb 'buy' should be in the past tense 'bought' to match the adverb 'recently' indicating a past action.

× Nowadays there is a time to for online shopping a lot

✓ Nowadays there is a lot of online shopping.

The original sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. The phrase 'there is a time to for online shopping a lot' is incorrect. The corrected sentence uses the correct 'there is' structure followed by a quantifier and noun phrase to express the idea clearly.

× If I'm getting a comfortable shoes, even in the lower prices like 50 and $60.00, I, I prefer to buy that.

✓ If I'm getting comfortable shoes, even at lower prices like $50 or $60, I prefer to buy them.

'Shoes' is plural, so 'a comfortable shoes' is incorrect; the article 'a' should be removed. Also, 'in the lower prices' should be 'at lower prices' to use the correct preposition. The phrase 'I, I prefer to buy that' is corrected to 'I prefer to buy them' to agree with plural 'shoes'.

× If I'm getting a comfortable shoes, even in the lower prices like 50 and $60.00, I, I prefer to buy that.

✓ If I'm getting comfortable shoes, even at lower prices like $50 or $60, I prefer to buy them.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to prices; 'at' is the correct preposition to indicate price levels.

× I will always prefer the comfortable suits because I think the fashion is for a limited time of period varies.

✓ I will always prefer comfortable shoes because I think fashion varies over a limited period of time.

'Suits' is incorrect in context; 'shoes' is intended. Also, 'the fashion is for a limited time of period varies' is ungrammatical and unclear. It is corrected to 'fashion varies over a limited period of time' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I'm not very fashion person who go with the fashion.

✓ I'm not a very fashionable person who goes with fashion.

'Fashion' is a noun, but here an adjective is needed; 'fashionable' is correct. Also, 'person' is singular, so the verb should be 'goes' not 'go'. The article 'a' is missing before 'very fashionable person'.

× If I am comfortable and I like the shoes I will go with the that no matter people like it or not that's.

✓ If I am comfortable and I like the shoes, I will go with them no matter whether people like it or not.

'The that' is incorrect; it should be 'them' to refer to 'shoes'. Also, the sentence is missing commas for clarity and 'whether' is added to correctly introduce the clause 'people like it or not'.