Shoes— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Candidato
Uh, yes, I uh, like buying shoes, uh, but umm, not uh, regularly, but uh, for the need I need to do for my daily life. That's it. So I don't need to waste money on the shoes.
Examinador
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Candidato
Ah yes I have bought shoes online and it was umm a lean company and it was in offer price so I bought it.
Examinador
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Candidato
Well, it's not a fixed, but, uh, depending on the offer. So when I get around UH-3000 shoes only for 1000, it's around 60% discount. So I buy this shoes, So around budget is uh, within 200 uh, 2000 taka.
Examinador
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Candidato
Will I prefer a comfortable shoes? Because I need to wear shoes for a very long time in my class and duty more than 7 hours. So I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable shoes.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: Apni answer e onek hesitation ar filler words use korchen, ja natural English er jonno bhalo na. Apnar uttor ke aro clear, direct, ar concise korte hobe. Prothome direct question er uttor din, tarpor proyojone supporting details din, kintu 5 sentence er moddhe thakun.
Exemplo: Yes, I like buying shoes, but I don't buy them regularly. I usually buy shoes only when I need them for daily use. I prefer not to waste money on unnecessary shoes.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: Apnar uttor e kichu unclear kotha ache, jemon 'a lean company' er mane spasto na. Apni clear ar simple bhabe bolun, ar linking word use korun jate uttor ta logical hoy.
Exemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online before. It was from a reliable company, and the shoes were on sale, so I decided to buy them.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: Apnar uttor e onek hesitation ar repetition ache. Apni clear ar structured bhabe bolun, ar linking words use korun. Specific details dite paren jemon kon offer ar koto taka budget ache.
Exemplo: I don't have a fixed budget for shoes. Usually, I buy shoes when there is a good discount. For example, I once bought shoes worth 3000 taka for only 1000 taka, which was a 60% discount. So, my budget is usually within 2000 taka.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: Apnar uttor bhalo, kintu kichu grammar mistake ache, ar linking word aro bhalo bhabe use korte paren. Apni direct question er uttor din, tarpor karon shoho supporting details din.
Exemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes because I have to wear them for more than seven hours during my classes and work. Therefore, comfort is more important to me than fashion.
Gramática
× So I don't need to waste money on the shoes.
✓ So I don't need to waste money on shoes.
In English, when talking about things in general, we usually omit the definite article 'the' before plural nouns. Saying 'on shoes' is more natural than 'on the shoes' in this context.
× So I buy this shoes, So around budget is uh, within 200 uh, 2000 taka.
✓ So I buy these shoes. So the budget is around 2000 taka.
The demonstrative pronoun 'this' is singular and should be 'these' for plural 'shoes'. Also, the phrase 'around budget is uh, within 200 uh, 2000 taka' is unclear and needs correction to 'the budget is around 2000 taka' for clarity and correctness.
× Will I prefer a comfortable shoes?
✓ Will I prefer comfortable shoes?
The noun 'shoes' is plural, so the article 'a' which is singular should be omitted. 'Comfortable shoes' is correct without 'a'.
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