Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by using correct grammar and sentence structure. Also, avoid redundancy and be more specific about your buying frequency. For example, say "I like buying shoes, especially when I need to replace old ones. I usually buy shoes once or twice a year, and I prefer good quality."

Exemplo: I enjoy buying shoes, especially when my old ones are worn out. Usually, I purchase new shoes once or twice a year, focusing on quality rather than quantity.

Sugestão: Improve clarity and coherence by using proper linking words and clearer expressions. Avoid awkward phrases like "which is a really new trends announcing." Instead, say "Yes, I often buy shoes online because it's convenient and I can find the latest trends on websites. I prefer to buy high-quality shoes online."

Exemplo: Yes, I often buy shoes online because it is convenient. I usually browse websites to find the latest trends and prefer to purchase high-quality shoes this way.

Sugestão: Focus on clear and grammatically correct sentences. Avoid filler words like "uh" and clarify your points. For example, say "I usually buy shoes twice a year, focusing on good quality, which can be expensive. I spend around $100 to $200 on each pair."

Exemplo: I usually buy shoes twice a year, and I focus on good quality, which tends to be expensive. Typically, I spend between $100 and $200 on each pair.

Sugestão: Make your answer more natural and structured. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct grammar. For example, say "I prefer both fashionable and comfortable shoes depending on the occasion and my outfit. Most of the time, I choose comfortable shoes, but for parties or weddings, I prefer fashionable ones."

Exemplo: I prefer both fashionable and comfortable shoes depending on the occasion and my outfit. Usually, I choose comfortable shoes for daily use, but for special events like parties or weddings, I opt for fashionable shoes.

× I'm a fan of to buy shoes, especially when I want to change my old shoes into new.

✓ I'm a fan of buying shoes, especially when I want to change my old shoes for new ones.

The phrase 'a fan of' should be followed by a gerund (verb + -ing), not an infinitive ('to buy'). Also, 'change my old shoes into new' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'change my old shoes for new ones' to indicate replacement.

× So I love to buy shopping, but after each six months or one son to twice an ear I buy.

✓ So I love shopping, but I buy shoes once or twice a year, usually every six months.

The phrase 'love to buy shopping' is incorrect; 'love shopping' is correct. 'After each six months or one son to twice an ear I buy' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. The correct expression is 'I buy shoes once or twice a year, usually every six months.'

× Yes, most of the time I do online shopping or buying shoes which is a really new trends announcing and I go through by website and search for the recently announced new trends.

✓ Yes, most of the time I do online shopping or buy shoes, which is a really new trend, and I go through websites to search for the recently announced new trends.

The phrase 'buying shoes which is a really new trends announcing' is incorrect; it should be 'buy shoes, which is a really new trend.' Also, 'go through by website' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go through websites.'

× I prefer more high quality online shopping.

✓ I prefer higher quality online shopping.

The phrase 'more high quality' is incorrect; the correct comparative form is 'higher quality.'

× I prefer uh, quality or quantity, so I buy twice in a year shoes, but it's must be good quality which come obviously in high prices, so around 1 to $200.

✓ I prefer quality over quantity, so I buy shoes twice a year, but they must be good quality, which obviously comes at a high price, around $100 to $200.

The phrase 'it's must be' is incorrect; the correct modal verb usage is 'they must be.' Also, 'come obviously in high prices' should be 'comes at a high price.' The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I will prefer both of them but as per my delegator and outfit, what I were wearing and where I would prefer to go.

✓ I will prefer both of them depending on my delegate and outfit, what I am wearing, and where I plan to go.

The phrase 'as per my delegator' is unclear; possibly 'depending on my delegate' or 'depending on my role.' 'What I were wearing' is incorrect; it should be 'what I am wearing.' 'Where I would prefer to go' should be 'where I plan to go.'

× But if the when it's come to the party or wedding then I would prefer.

✓ But when it comes to a party or wedding, then I would prefer fashionable shoes.

The phrase 'if the when it's come' is incorrect; it should be 'when it comes.' Also, the sentence is incomplete; specifying preference for fashionable shoes completes the thought.