Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors such as 'they allows' which should be 'they allow'. Also, try to avoid redundancy and keep your sentences concise. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes because they allow me to express my personal style. I usually buy new shoes every few months, especially during sales or when I need specific ones for work or casual wear. For instance, I recently bought a pair of comfortable sneakers that I wear almost daily.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to form complete sentences and use correct verb forms. Also, provide more specific details and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I mostly buy sneakers online because it is very convenient. I can compare prices without leaving my home and see a wide variety of options on websites. For example, once I purchased sneakers from an international website, and the delivery was very fast.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains repetition and grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid repeating words. Also, specify the currency and use linking words to explain your spending habits.

Exemplo: Usually, I spend around 10,000 to 15,000 rupees every month on shoes because I love collecting sneakers. Therefore, most of my money goes towards buying different types of sneakers.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and repetition. Use correct verb forms and avoid repeating words. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable ones because they allow me to walk or stand for long periods without pain or discomfort. For example, when I go shopping or travel, comfortable shoes help me avoid sore feet, even though fashionable shoes may look appealing.

× Yes, I enjoy buying shoes quite a lot because they allows me to express my personal style.

✓ Yes, I enjoy buying shoes quite a lot because they allow me to express my personal style.

The subject 'they' is plural, so the verb should be 'allow' instead of 'allows' to agree in number. In English, plural subjects take the base form of the verb without 's'.

× Yes, my mostly sneakers bought online and it is very convenient because I can compare price without leaving my home and I can see most of varieties in websites.

✓ Yes, I mostly buy sneakers online and it is very convenient because I can compare prices without leaving my home and I can see most varieties on websites.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing verbs. 'My mostly sneakers bought online' is not a correct structure; it should be 'I mostly buy sneakers online'. Also, 'compare price' should be plural 'compare prices' and 'most of varieties in websites' should be 'most varieties on websites'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× For example, once I purchase my sneakers from an international website and they give me.

✓ For example, once I purchased my sneakers from an international website and they delivered them to me.

The action happened in the past, so 'purchase' should be in past tense 'purchased'. Also, the sentence was incomplete; 'they give me' is incorrect and should be 'they delivered them to me' to complete the thought properly.

× Usually I can spend 10 to 15,000 every month because I love I love and I want to collection of my sneakers.

✓ Usually I can spend 10,000 to 15,000 every month because I love and want to collect my sneakers.

The phrase 'I want to collection' is incorrect; 'collection' is a noun, so the verb should be 'collect'. Also, the repetition 'I love I love' is an error and should be corrected. The quantifier '10 to 15,000' is ambiguous; it is clearer to say '10,000 to 15,000'.

× That's why I mostly my mostly spend of money is on sneakers.

✓ That's why most of my spending is on sneakers.

The original sentence has redundant and misplaced words 'mostly my mostly spend of money'. The corrected sentence uses proper word order and phrasing to express the idea clearly.

× I prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable ones because they allows me to walk or stand for long periods without pain or discomfort.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable ones because they allow me to walk or stand for long periods without pain or discomfort.

The subject 'they' is plural, so the verb should be 'allow' instead of 'allows' to agree in number.

× For example, when when I go for a shopping or a travel wear, comfortable shoes helps me avoid sore feet, although fashionable shoes may look appealing.

✓ For example, when I go shopping or travel, comfortable shoes help me avoid sore feet, although fashionable shoes may look appealing.

The phrase 'when when' is a repetition error and should be 'when'. 'Go for a shopping or a travel wear' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping or travel'. Also, 'comfortable shoes helps' should be 'comfortable shoes help' to agree with the plural subject. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.