Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to avoid filler words such as 'uh' and 'umm' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, be careful with grammar and word choice, for example, say 'once a week' instead of 'one times a week'. Keep your answer concise and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and supporting detail.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy buying shoes and usually purchase a new pair about once a week because I like to keep up with the latest styles.

Sugestão: Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, say 'There is a positive trend in China because online shopping is very convenient, and people have a wide range of choices.'

Exemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online. In China, online shopping has become very popular because it is convenient and offers a wide variety of options.

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to form complete sentences and explain your points clearly. Avoid idioms that might confuse the listener. For example, say 'I usually spend more on high heels for formal occasions because they are more expensive than sneakers.'

Exemplo: The amount I spend on shoes varies. For formal occasions, I usually buy high heels, which are more expensive than sneakers, so I tend to spend quite a bit on them.

Sugestão: Try to avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words like 'however' to contrast ideas. Also, check grammar, for example, 'comfortable shoes make me feel relaxed.'

Exemplo: It depends on the occasion. For formal meetings, I prefer fashionable shoes because they make me look elegant; however, in my free time, I choose comfortable shoes as they help me relax.

× I always buy shoes frequently and uh, umm, I think, uh, almost, uh, one times a week I will buy a pair of new shoes.

✓ I always buy shoes frequently and uh, umm, I think, uh, almost, uh, one time a week I will buy a pair of new shoes.

The phrase 'one times a week' is incorrect because 'one' is singular and should be followed by the singular noun 'time' instead of the plural 'times'. To correct this, use 'one time a week'. This ensures subject and noun number agreement.

× Sure, uh, there are positive trend in China uh, everyone will uh try to buy shoes and clothes online because it's very convenient and there are a wide range, wide range of choice uh, you can uh have from Internet.

✓ Sure, uh, there is a positive trend in China uh, everyone will uh try to buy shoes and clothes online because it's very convenient and there is a wide range, wide range of choice uh, you can uh have from the Internet.

The phrase 'there are positive trend' is incorrect because 'trend' is singular and should be preceded by 'is' instead of 'are'. Similarly, 'there are a wide range' is incorrect because 'range' is singular and requires 'is'. Also, 'from Internet' needs the definite article 'the'. These corrections ensure correct subject-verb agreement and article usage.

× there are a wide range, wide range of choice uh, you can uh have from Internet.

✓ there is a wide range, wide range of choice uh, you can uh have from the Internet.

The phrase 'from Internet' lacks the definite article 'the'. In English, 'Internet' is a unique entity and requires the definite article 'the' before it. Therefore, it should be 'from the Internet'.

× Informal occasion. I always need to wear high heel shoes which is a more expensive than sneakers.

✓ Informal occasions. I always need to wear high-heeled shoes which are more expensive than sneakers.

'Informal occasion' should be plural 'occasions' to match the general statement. 'High heel shoes' should be 'high-heeled shoes' as the adjective form. Also, 'which is a more expensive' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural and requires 'are more expensive' without the article 'a'.

× It almost cost me one leg and one arm.

✓ It almost costs me one leg and one arm.

The verb 'cost' should be in the present tense 'costs' to agree with the singular subject implied. This is an idiomatic expression meaning something is very expensive, so the verb should be present tense to match the habitual action.

× I always choose the fashionable shoes because it make me more graceful and elegant.

✓ I always choose the fashionable shoes because they make me more graceful and elegant.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect because it refers to 'shoes', which is plural. Therefore, the correct pronoun is 'they'. Also, the verb 'make' agrees with the plural subject 'they'. This corrects pronoun and verb agreement.

× But in layer time I will choose comfortable shoe.

✓ But in later time I will choose comfortable shoes.

'Layer time' is a typo and should be 'later time'. Also, 'comfortable shoe' should be plural 'comfortable shoes' to match the general meaning of choosing shoes in plural form.

× Comfortable shoes it make me relaxing and.

✓ Comfortable shoes make me relaxed.

The phrase 'Comfortable shoes it make me relaxing and.' is incorrect because 'it' is unnecessary and 'make' should agree with the plural subject 'shoes'. Also, 'relaxing' is a present participle and should be replaced with the adjective 'relaxed' to describe the speaker's state. The sentence is corrected to 'Comfortable shoes make me relaxed.'