Shoes— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Candidato
I enjoy buying shoes but I don't do it too often. Normally I buy shoes maybe once a year or longer than that. I enjoy the feeling why I have to look for shoes. Trying shoes but.
Examinador
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Candidato
Yes, I used to buy a pair of shoes online, but it disappointed me because I know it's kind of hard to measure the accurate side without trying on those two in person, so there are a lot of mistakes that could happen.
Examinador
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Candidato
I would set a goal with myself that I will never spend too much money than 3000, but per a pair of shoes, yeah, that's kind of a great goal because it keep reminding me that I have a budget planned for like outside material.
Examinador
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Candidato
When I was a teenage I used to focus only trendy shoes or fashionable shoes, but as I grown up I think I more focus on how comfortable it was when I'm wearing it.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: ควรตอบคำถามให้ชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น โดยเริ่มด้วยประโยคหลักที่ตอบคำถามตรงๆ จากนั้นเสริมรายละเอียดที่ชัดเจนและเชื่อมโยงกันอย่างมีเหตุผล เช่น อธิบายความรู้สึกหรือเหตุผลที่ชอบซื้อรองเท้า และความถี่ในการซื้ออย่างชัดเจน พร้อมใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหลของประโยค
Exemplo: Yes, I like buying shoes, but I don't do it very often. Usually, I buy new shoes about once a year because I prefer quality over quantity. I enjoy the process of trying on different styles to find the perfect fit.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: ควรตอบให้ชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น โดยเริ่มด้วยประโยคหลักที่ตอบคำถาม จากนั้นเสริมเหตุผลหรือประสบการณ์ส่วนตัวที่เกี่ยวข้อง พร้อมใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้ประโยคลื่นไหลและมีความสมเหตุสมผล
Exemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online before, but it was disappointing because it's difficult to choose the right size without trying them on. As a result, I received shoes that didn't fit well, which was frustrating.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: ควรตอบคำถามให้ตรงประเด็นและชัดเจนมากขึ้น โดยเริ่มด้วยประโยคหลักที่ตอบคำถามเกี่ยวกับงบประมาณ จากนั้นอธิบายเหตุผลหรือรายละเอียดเพิ่มเติมอย่างเป็นระบบและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล
Exemplo: I usually set a budget of no more than 3,000 baht for each pair of shoes. This helps me manage my expenses and ensures I buy shoes made of good quality materials without overspending.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Pontuação: 75.0Sugestão: ควรตอบให้ชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น โดยเริ่มด้วยประโยคหลักที่ตอบคำถาม จากนั้นเสริมเหตุผลหรือประสบการณ์ส่วนตัวที่เปลี่ยนแปลงไป พร้อมใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้ประโยคลื่นไหลและมีความสมเหตุสมผล
Exemplo: When I was a teenager, I preferred fashionable shoes because I wanted to follow trends. However, now I prioritize comfort because I realize it's more important for my daily activities.
Gramática
× I enjoy the feeling why I have to look for shoes.
✓ I enjoy the feeling when I have to look for shoes.
The phrase 'why I have to look for shoes' is incorrect here. The correct conjunction to express the time or situation is 'when'. Using 'when' properly connects the feeling to the action of looking for shoes.
× Trying shoes but.
✓ Trying on shoes, though.
The original sentence fragment 'Trying shoes but.' is incomplete and lacks a subject and verb. Adding 'Trying on shoes, though.' makes it a complete phrase and clarifies the meaning. 'Trying on' is the correct phrasal verb for testing shoes.
× Yes, I used to buy a pair of shoes online, but it disappointed me because I know it's kind of hard to measure the accurate side without trying on those two in person, so there are a lot of mistakes that could happen.
✓ Yes, I used to buy a pair of shoes online, but it disappointed me because I knew it was kind of hard to measure the accurate size without trying on them in person, so a lot of mistakes could happen.
The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'I know' should be 'I knew' to match past tense. 'Accurate side' is incorrect; it should be 'accurate size'. 'Those two' is unclear; 'them' is better to refer to shoes. Also, 'there are a lot of mistakes that could happen' is better as 'a lot of mistakes could happen' for clarity.
× I would set a goal with myself that I will never spend too much money than 3000, but per a pair of shoes, yeah, that's kind of a great goal because it keep reminding me that I have a budget planned for like outside material.
✓ I would set a goal for myself that I will never spend more than 3000 per pair of shoes. Yeah, that's kind of a great goal because it keeps reminding me that I have a budget planned for things like outer material.
The phrase 'set a goal with myself' is incorrect; it should be 'set a goal for myself'. 'Too much money than 3000' is incorrect; it should be 'more than 3000'. 'Per a pair of shoes' should be 'per pair of shoes'. 'It keep reminding me' should be 'it keeps reminding me'. 'Like outside material' is unclear; 'things like outer material' is clearer.
× When I was a teenage I used to focus only trendy shoes or fashionable shoes, but as I grown up I think I more focus on how comfortable it was when I'm wearing it.
✓ When I was a teenager, I used to focus only on trendy or fashionable shoes, but as I have grown up, I think I focus more on how comfortable they are when I wear them.
'A teenage' is incorrect; it should be 'a teenager'. 'Focus only trendy shoes' needs the preposition 'on'. 'As I grown up' should be 'as I have grown up'. 'I more focus' should be 'I focus more'. 'How comfortable it was when I'm wearing it' should be 'how comfortable they are when I wear them' to agree in number and tense.
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