Shoes— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Candidato
I absolutely love buying new shoes and I usually buy a pair every month. Shoes can completely transform an outfit so I like to have different styles for different occasions such as I prefer chunky shoes for a special events while I on daily basis I love to wear the comfortable sneakers.
Examinador
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Candidato
Yes, I have bought shoes online many times because you can open find a great discount on online sites. For example, recently I purchased 2 pairs of shoes with the 25% off on the second pair, which was an excellent deal. Which was the excellent deal. I find online shopping is very convenient and affordable and so I usually prefer to.
Examinador
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Candidato
I usually spend around $250 on shoes each month because I like to match them with my outfits. I have a keen interest to buy the new styles, that is uh, that is a fresh collection in a market. This way I can keep my wardrobe looking updated and stylish. So, umm, as compared to buying, uh, expensive clothes.
Examinador
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Candidato
Most of the time I prefer to be a comfortable shoes because they provide a good sport and allow me to stay, you know, on my feet on a long periods without any pain. However, I do enjoy wearing a fashionable shoes on a special occasion such as party or the formal events because they enhance my overall look and boost boost my confidence. So while comfort is my priority daily, I like to choose a style.
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Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Pontuação: 75.0Sugestão: Try to avoid minor grammatical errors and redundancy. For example, instead of saying "such as I prefer chunky shoes for a special events while I on daily basis I love to wear the comfortable sneakers," you could say "For special events, I prefer chunky shoes, while on a daily basis, I like comfortable sneakers." Also, keep your sentences concise and clear.
Exemplo: I love buying new shoes and usually get a pair every month. Shoes can transform an outfit, so I choose chunky shoes for special events and comfortable sneakers for daily wear.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. For instance, "Which was the excellent deal" is repeated and the last sentence is incomplete. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly, such as "because" or "so."
Exemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online many times because you can find great discounts. For example, I recently purchased two pairs with 25% off the second pair, which was an excellent deal. I find online shopping convenient and affordable, so I usually prefer it.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: Try to avoid filler words like "uh" and "umm" and improve sentence clarity. For example, instead of "I have a keen interest to buy the new styles, that is uh, that is a fresh collection in a market," say "I am keen to buy new styles from the latest collections." Also, complete your comparisons clearly.
Exemplo: I usually spend around $250 on shoes each month because I like to match them with my outfits. I am keen to buy new styles from the latest collections to keep my wardrobe updated and stylish. Compared to buying expensive clothes, I prioritize shoes.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: Focus on grammatical accuracy and avoid filler phrases like "you know." For example, "I prefer comfortable shoes because they provide good support and allow me to stand for long periods without pain." Also, avoid repeating words like "boost boost."
Exemplo: Most of the time, I prefer comfortable shoes because they provide good support and let me stand for long periods without pain. However, I enjoy wearing fashionable shoes on special occasions like parties or formal events because they enhance my look and boost my confidence. So, while comfort is my daily priority, I also like to choose stylish shoes.
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