Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答が不自然で文法的に誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に対して直接的に答え、理由や頻度を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。例えば、"I don't buy shoes often, but I usually buy new ones when my favorite soccer team releases special edition shoes."のように簡潔で明確な表現を心がけてください。

Exemplo: I don't buy shoes very often. Usually, I only buy new shoes when my favorite soccer team releases special edition shoes.

Sugestão: 文法の誤りと不自然な表現が目立ちます。オンラインで靴を買う理由を明確にし、接続詞を使って論理的に説明する練習をしましょう。例えば、"Yes, I always buy shoes online because the products I want are only available there. It is convenient and often cheaper."のように簡潔に述べると良いです。

Exemplo: Yes, I always buy shoes online because the products I want are only available there. It is convenient and often cheaper.

Sugestão: 内容は伝わりますが、文法と語順の誤りがあります。金額や頻度を明確に述べ、友人との比較を自然に表現しましょう。例えば、"I usually spend about A510,000 on shoes once a year. However, I was surprised to hear that my friends spend three times that amount in just one month."のように言えます。

Exemplo: I usually spend about A510,000 on shoes once a year. However, I was surprised to hear that my friends spend three times that amount in just one month.

Sugestão: 文法の誤りと不自然な表現が多いです。好みの理由を明確にし、接続詞を使って論理的に説明しましょう。例えば、"I prefer comfortable shoes to fashionable ones because fashionable shoes rarely fit me well and often hurt my feet. Therefore, comfort is my priority when buying shoes."のように表現できます。

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes to fashionable ones because fashionable shoes rarely fit me well and often hurt my feet. Therefore, comfort is my priority when buying shoes.

× I don't usually buy shoes, but I will buy new shoes when my favorite soccer team, probably with the shoes planned and only that time I will buy new shoes.

✓ I don't usually buy shoes, but I will buy new shoes when my favorite soccer team has a new uniform, probably with the shoes planned, and only at that time will I buy new shoes.

The original sentence is incomplete and confusing, lacking a main verb and proper structure. The phrase 'probably with the shoes planned' is unclear and needs clarification. The corrected sentence adds the verb 'has' to indicate possession of a new uniform and rearranges the sentence for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, every time I buy shoes I'm always buying online shopping store because the club rate product only selling online stores.

✓ Yes, every time I buy shoes, I always buy from online shopping stores because the club-rate products are only sold in online stores.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'I'm always buying' and 'only selling' which are incorrect verb forms here. The correction uses simple present tense 'I always buy' and passive voice 'are only sold' to correctly express habitual action and product availability.

× So I forced to buy in online shopping store but it's OK because it is very convenient and also have discount.

✓ So I am forced to buy from online shopping stores, but it's OK because it is very convenient and also has discounts.

The original sentence lacks the auxiliary verb 'am' after 'I' to form the passive voice 'am forced'. Also, 'have discount' should be 'has discounts' to agree with the singular subject 'it' and plural noun 'discounts'.

× I don't spend a lot to buy new shoes, I just spend ¥10,000 like once a year.

✓ I don't spend a lot on buying new shoes; I just spend about ¥10,000 once a year.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect after 'spend'; the correct preposition is 'on'. Also, 'like once a year' is informal and better replaced with 'about once a year' for clarity.

× But I heard my friends spend like 3 times more money only in one month so I when I heard this I'm really surprised.

✓ But I heard my friends spend about three times more money in just one month, so when I heard this, I was really surprised.

The sentence has misplaced words and incorrect pronoun usage. 'I when I heard this' is incorrect; it should be 'so when I heard this'. Also, 'like 3 times more money only in one month' is better expressed as 'about three times more money in just one month'.

× I more prefer to wear comfortable shoes than fashionable shoes because fashionable shoes rarely fit my feet and that caused her my feet a lot.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable shoes rather than fashionable shoes because fashionable shoes rarely fit my feet and they hurt my feet a lot.

The phrase 'I more prefer' is incorrect; 'prefer' does not need 'more'. 'Than' is correct for comparison. 'That caused her my feet a lot' is incorrect; it should be 'they hurt my feet a lot' to correctly express pain caused by shoes.

× So when I buy shoes, I place importance in comfortable.

✓ So when I buy shoes, I place importance on comfort.

The phrase 'place importance in' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on'. Also, 'comfortable' is an adjective, but the noun 'comfort' is needed here.