Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and slight awkwardness in phrasing. For example, "This help me save money" should be "This helps me save money," and "unnecessary purchase" should be "unnecessary purchases." Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly, such as "because" or "so."

Exemplo: No, I don't really enjoy buying shoes because a good pair usually lasts a long time. Therefore, I tend to keep my shoes for several years before replacing them, which helps me save money and avoid unnecessary purchases.

Sugestão: There are several grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases in your answer. For example, "soups" should be "shoes," and "save me a lot of time" should be "saves me a lot of time." Also, the sentence "I prefer a shopping online can see lot of various lots of styles" is confusing. Try to use clearer sentence structures and linking words like "because" or "so."

Exemplo: Yes, I often buy shoes online because it's very convenient and saves me a lot of time. Sometimes, I need a specific pair to match my outfit, so I prefer shopping online since I can see a wide variety of styles.

Sugestão: Your answer is mostly clear but contains some errors and awkward phrasing. For example, "between $15 and to $100" should be "between $15 and $100," and "affordable suits" should be "affordable shoes." Also, use linking words like "because" to explain your preferences more smoothly.

Exemplo: Usually, I spend between $15 and $100 on shoes, depending on the brand and style. I prefer to buy comfortable and affordable shoes because sometimes I may invest a bit more to ensure good quality.

Sugestão: There are several errors and unclear phrases in your answer. For example, "soups" should be "shoes," and "work a stamp for long period" is unclear—perhaps you meant "work a lot for long periods." Try to use clearer sentences and linking words like "because" to explain your reasons.

Exemplo: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because they are essential for my daily life since I often work long hours. I prefer shoes that provide good support, and for me, comfort is more important than fashion because it helps me stay active.

× This help me save money and avoid unnecessary purchase.

✓ This helps me save money and avoid unnecessary purchases.

The verb 'help' should be in the third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'This'. Also, 'purchase' should be plural 'purchases' to match the context of multiple instances.

× This help me save money and avoid unnecessary purchase.

✓ This helps me save money and avoid unnecessary purchases.

The noun 'purchase' should be plural 'purchases' because it refers to multiple instances of buying, not a single purchase.

× Yes, I often buy soups online because it's very convenient for me and save me a lot of time.

✓ Yes, I often buy shoes online because it's very convenient for me and saves me a lot of time.

The word 'soups' is incorrect; it should be 'shoes' to match the context. Also, 'save' should be 'saves' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× Yes, I often buy soups online because it's very convenient for me and save me a lot of time.

✓ Yes, I often buy shoes online because it's very convenient for me and saves me a lot of time.

The verb 'save' should be 'saves' to agree with the singular subject 'it' referring to buying shoes online.

× Sometime I just need a specific pair of shoes for to match my outfit, so I prefer a shopping online can see lot of various lots of styles.

✓ Sometimes I just need a specific pair of shoes to match my outfit, so I prefer shopping online because I can see lots of various styles.

'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'For to match' is incorrect; it should be 'to match'. 'A shopping online' is incorrect; it should be 'shopping online'. 'Can see lot of various lots of styles' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'because I can see lots of various styles'.

× Sometime I just need a specific pair of shoes for to match my outfit, so I prefer a shopping online can see lot of various lots of styles.

✓ Sometimes I just need a specific pair of shoes to match my outfit, so I prefer shopping online because I can see lots of various styles.

The preposition 'for to match' is incorrect; the correct form is 'to match'. Also, 'a shopping online' is incorrect; 'shopping online' does not need an article.

× Usually I spend between $15 and to $100 on shoes, depending on the brand and style.

✓ Usually I spend between $15 and $100 on shoes, depending on the brand and style.

The phrase 'between $15 and to $100' is incorrect; 'to' should be removed to correctly express the range.

× I prefer to buy comfortable and affordable suits, so sometime I may invest a bit more to ensure good quality.

✓ I prefer to buy comfortable and affordable shoes, so sometimes I may invest a bit more to ensure good quality.

The word 'suits' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'shoes'. Also, 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency.

× I definitely prefer comfortable soups because they are essential for my daily life since I often work a stamp for long period.

✓ I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because they are essential for my daily life since I often work a shift for a long period.

'Soups' is incorrect; it should be 'shoes'. 'A stamp' is incorrect; likely intended 'a shift'. Also, 'for long period' should be 'for a long period'.

× I definitely prefer comfortable soups because they are essential for my daily life since I often work a stamp for long period.

✓ I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because they are essential for my daily life since I often work a shift for a long period.

The preposition 'for' before 'long period' requires an article; it should be 'for a long period'.

× I prefer shoes that provide good support and for me comfort is more important than fashion because it helps me stay active.

✓ I prefer shoes that provide good support, and for me, comfort is more important than fashion because it helps me stay active.

A comma is needed after 'support' to separate the clauses properly. Also, commas around 'for me' improve clarity.