Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is quite detailed and natural, but it can be improved by starting directly with a clear topic sentence addressing the frequency, then adding reasons with linking words to make it more coherent and concise. Avoid repeating similar ideas and keep it within 5 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I like buying shoes, but I don't do it very often because I prefer investing in high-quality, comfortable pairs. This is because I believe that comfort and durability are more important than quantity. Therefore, I choose to buy fewer shoes but of better quality.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and clear, but you can improve coherence by using linking words and making the answer more concise. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating the same idea in different words.

Exemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online a couple of times; however, I feel it doesn't compare to buying offline. This is because when shopping offline, I can try the shoes on and assess their comfort and quality, which is not possible online.

Sugestão: Your answer provides relevant details but can be improved by linking ideas smoothly and avoiding informal words like 'bucks'. Also, try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons or preferences.

Exemplo: I usually spend between 5,000 and 10,000 rupees on good quality shoes, depending on the brand and type. Generally, I prefer comfortable sneakers over chunky shoes because they suit my daily activities better.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and personal, but it can be improved by using more natural expressions and linking words to enhance coherence. Also, avoid awkward phrases like 'I'm hands down to'.

Exemplo: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable ones because I have experienced that fashionable shoes are often uncomfortable when I wear them out. Therefore, I always choose comfort to ensure I can walk and stand without any pain.

× I love to invest in good, high quality, expensive shoes rather than inexpensive ones because I think comfort and quality plays a major role.

✓ I love to invest in good, high quality, expensive shoes rather than inexpensive ones because I think comfort and quality play a major role.

The subject 'comfort and quality' is plural, so the verb should be 'play' instead of 'plays' to agree in number.

× Yes, I have bought shoes online couple of times but I don't think it equals to the experience of buying it offline.

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online a couple of times but I don't think it equals the experience of buying them offline.

The phrase 'couple of times' requires the article 'a' before it. Also, 'equals to' is incorrect; 'equals' should be used without 'to'. Additionally, 'it' referring to 'shoes' should be 'them' as 'shoes' is plural.

× While buying it offline I can wear it and walk around with it and experience the true quality of the shoe but when it comes to online it's not possible.

✓ While buying them offline I can wear them and walk around with them and experience the true quality of the shoes but when it comes to online it's not possible.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to 'shoes' which is plural, so 'them' should be used instead for correct pronoun agreement.

× I usually spend 5000 to 10,000 bucks on any good quality shoes.

✓ I usually spend 5000 to 10,000 bucks on good quality shoes.

The article 'any' is unnecessary here and can be omitted for natural expression.

× I mostly prefer buying comfortable sneakers than chunky ones.

✓ I mostly prefer buying comfortable sneakers to chunky ones.

The correct preposition after 'prefer' when comparing two things is 'to', not 'than'.

× I'm hands down to comfortable shoes than fashionable ones because I've had experience of buying fashionable ones and that turning up to be the uncomfortable ones while I dress up and go out.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes hands down to fashionable ones because I've had experience buying fashionable ones that turned out to be uncomfortable when I dressed up and went out.

The phrase 'I'm hands down to' is incorrect; 'I prefer ... hands down to' is correct. Also, 'that turning up to be' should be 'that turned out to be' to correctly express past experience. The verb tenses in the last part should be past tense to match the context.