Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I'm really like' nên là 'I really like'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài và có một số lỗi về cấu trúc câu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I really like buying shoes because they make me feel happy and can change my outfit, making me look more fashionable. I usually buy about one pair per month since I'm still a student and have a limited budget.

Sugestão: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các từ ngập ngừng như 'uh', 'umm' và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như 'when I buying' thành 'when I buy'. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có liên từ để nối ý tốt hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online a few times. At first, I thought buying shoes online was not very good because I couldn't see them in real life. However, after buying a few times, I found it very convenient and the prices are more affordable.

Sugestão: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'I'm not usually spend' nên là 'I don't usually spend'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi lủng củng và thiếu liên kết giữa các ý. Hãy sử dụng liên từ và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn.

Exemplo: I don't usually spend too much on shoes, but I prefer to buy good quality ones because I use them a lot. Therefore, I often spend between 500,000 to 1,000,000 Vietnamese dong on a pair.

Sugestão: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ như 'I want I want' và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như 'a comfortable shoes' thành 'comfortable shoes'. Câu trả lời cần ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và có liên từ để nối các ý mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: In my opinion, I prefer fashionable shoes over comfortable ones because I care about how they look. When I wear fashionable shoes, I feel more confident, so my priority is style.

× Yes, I'm really like buying shoes because buying shoes make me feel happy and it can change how my outfit and make me more fashionable.

✓ Yes, I really like buying shoes because buying shoes makes me feel happy and it can change how my outfit looks and make me more fashionable.

The phrase 'I'm really like' is incorrect; 'like' is a verb and should not be used with 'am' in this way. Also, 'buying shoes make me' should be 'buying shoes makes me' to agree with the singular subject 'buying shoes'. Additionally, 'change how my outfit' is incomplete and should be 'change how my outfit looks' to be grammatically correct.

× I often buy shoes about one pair of shoes in per month because I'm still a student so I don't have a lot of money to spend on it.

✓ I often buy about one pair of shoes per month because I'm still a student so I don't have a lot of money to spend on them.

The phrase 'in per month' is incorrect; 'per month' is sufficient. Also, 'spend on it' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'them'.

× Yes, I have bought shoes online few times in the past.

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online a few times in the past.

The phrase 'few times' needs an article 'a' to be grammatically correct: 'a few times'.

× But uh, after few times I bought it umm I found it very good and when I buying it online the price are more affordable.

✓ But uh, after a few times I bought it, umm I found it very good and when I buy it online the prices are more affordable.

'After few times' should be 'after a few times'. 'When I buying it' is incorrect; it should be 'when I buy it' because 'when' is followed by the base verb. Also, 'price are' should be 'prices are' to agree in number.

× I'm not usually spend too much on shoes, but I really want to buy a good one because when I buy a new pair of shoes I will use it a lot and so I often spend about 500 or or to 1,000,000 Vietnam ***** on a pair of shoes.

✓ I don't usually spend too much on shoes, but I really want to buy a good one because when I buy a new pair of shoes I will use it a lot, so I often spend about 500,000 to 1,000,000 Vietnam ***** on a pair of shoes.

'I'm not usually spend' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't usually spend'. The phrase 'or or to' is incorrect and should be '500,000 to 1,000,000'. Also, a comma is needed before 'so' to separate the clauses.

× In my opinion, I will likely to choose fashionable shoes over a comfortable shoes because I really care about how good it looks and I want I want the shoes can be a fashionable items that when I wear it I feel feel more confident so I my priority is fashionable.

✓ In my opinion, I will likely choose fashionable shoes over comfortable shoes because I really care about how good they look and I want the shoes to be fashionable items that when I wear them I feel more confident, so my priority is fashion.

'I will likely to choose' should be 'I will likely choose' (no 'to'). 'A comfortable shoes' is incorrect; 'comfortable shoes' is plural and does not need 'a'. 'How good it looks' should be 'how good they look' to agree with plural 'shoes'. 'I want the shoes can be' should be 'I want the shoes to be'. 'Fashionable items' is plural, so 'a' is removed. 'When I wear it' should be 'when I wear them' to agree with plural 'shoes'. 'I feel feel' is a repetition and should be 'I feel'. 'So I my priority is fashionable' is corrected to 'so my priority is fashion' for clarity and correctness.