Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid irrelevant or confusing phrases, and keep your answer concise and natural. Use linking words if you add supporting details.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes quite often because I like to keep my style fresh. For example, I usually buy new shoes every few months when I find a design that suits me.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Focus on directly answering the question with clear sentences. Use specific details and linking words to explain why you bought shoes online.

Exemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online recently because I needed a pair of cowboy boots that were not available in local stores. Therefore, I decided to purchase them from an online shop.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and lacks coherence. Make sure to answer the question directly with clear and logical sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific details about your spending habits.

Exemplo: I usually don't spend a lot of money on shoes. However, if the quality is good, I am willing to pay a bit more because comfortable shoes last longer.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains irrelevant information. Directly state your preference and explain why, using clear and coherent sentences with appropriate linking words.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes because they suit different outfits, such as coats and track pants. Although fashionable shoes look nice, comfort is more important to me.

× I love buying machine records, especially when I find that pure of difference and makes me stylish.

✓ I love buying shoes, especially when I find that pure difference and it makes me stylish.

The phrase 'machine records' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'shoes' to match the topic. Also, 'pure of difference' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'pure difference'. Additionally, the sentence lacks the subject 'it' before 'makes me stylish'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I don't say I'm obsessed with shoes, I just bought.

✓ I don't say I'm obsessed with shoes; I just like to buy them.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. 'I just bought' is a fragment and does not convey a complete thought. Adding 'like to buy them' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× Uh, I like to wear.

✓ Uh, I like to wear them.

The sentence is incomplete without an object. Adding 'them' clarifies that the speaker likes to wear shoes.

× Yes, once I recently I bought shoes online like store shoes.

✓ Yes, recently I bought shoes online, like store shoes.

The phrase 'once I recently I bought' is redundant and awkward. Simplifying to 'recently I bought' improves sentence flow. Also, 'like store shoes' is unclear; it is better to clarify or omit if not necessary.

× Uh, I am a coward player so uh I need one cowboy suits and he cannot find that cowardice shoes in the substance, so I decided to buy it from online.

✓ Uh, I am a cowboy player, so I need a cowboy suit, but I could not find cowboy shoes in the store, so I decided to buy them online.

The original sentence misuses 'coward' instead of 'cowboy', and 'cowardice shoes' is incorrect. 'One cowboy suits' is incorrect; it should be 'a cowboy suit'. 'In the substance' is unclear and likely meant 'in the store'. Also, 'buy it from online' should be 'buy them online'. These corrections fix vocabulary and grammar errors.

× so I decided to buy it from online.

✓ so I decided to buy it online.

The preposition 'from' is unnecessary before 'online'. The correct phrase is 'buy it online'.

× Not that much, but, uh, when I see, uh, quality of shoes, I don't care of quality because if the quantity is good, then obviously the suit will be also good.

✓ Not that much, but, uh, when I see the quality of shoes, I care about the quality because if the quality is good, then obviously the suit will also be good.

The phrase 'I don't care of quality' is incorrect; it should be 'I care about the quality'. Also, 'quantity' is incorrectly used instead of 'quality'. The definite article 'the' is needed before 'quality of shoes'. These corrections improve meaning and grammar.

× So usually sometime I spend more money, some food, but I don't like to spend that much money.

✓ So usually sometimes I spend more money on some food, but I don't like to spend that much money.

The phrase 'some food' is unclear in this context; it likely means 'on some food'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. Adding 'on' clarifies the spending context.

× I prefer Jurong one because it's it's a nice suit and it comfortable for me it suits on different dress of liking coat also in track pants.

✓ I prefer the Jurong ones because they're nice shoes and comfortable for me; they suit different outfits like coats and track pants.

'Jurong one' is unclear; assuming 'Jurong ones' refers to a type of shoe. 'It's it's' is a repetition error. 'It comfortable' lacks the verb 'is'. 'It suits on different dress of liking coat also in track pants' is awkward; corrected to 'they suit different outfits like coats and track pants'. These corrections fix pronoun agreement and sentence clarity.

× However it is a good search.

✓ However, it is a good shoe.

'Search' is incorrect; the intended word is 'shoe'. Adding a comma after 'However' improves sentence structure.