Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议使用更准确的时态和表达方式，同时避免重复和冗余。可以简洁明了地表达自己的习惯。

Exemplo: I don't like buying many shoes. I usually wear a pair until they are worn out, and then I buy new ones.

Sugestão: 回答中语法和词汇使用不够准确，表达不够流畅。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意连贯性和词汇的准确性。

Exemplo: Yes, I usually buy shoes online, especially from a popular website in China. It's very convenient and the prices are much lower than in physical stores.

Sugestão: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，缺少具体的金额信息。建议直接回答问题并提供具体数字，同时注意语法和连贯性。

Exemplo: I usually spend around 500 to 800 yuan on shoes because I wear them every day for long hours, so comfort is very important to me.

Sugestão: 回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误和用词不当。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，并适当扩展理由。

Exemplo: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes. Since having children, I need shoes that allow me to move quickly and comfortably while taking care of them.

× My habit is wear one shoes until it broken and only it broken I can replace it buy a new one.

✓ My habit is to wear one pair of shoes until they are broken, and only when they are broken can I replace them by buying a new one.

这里'shoes'是复数，前面用'one'表示单数，应该用'one pair of shoes'表示一双鞋。'it broken'应改为'they are broken'，因为鞋是复数。

× My habit is wear one shoes until it broken and only it broken I can replace it buy a new one.

✓ My habit is to wear one pair of shoes until they are broken, and only when they are broken can I replace them by buying a new one.

动词短语中，'is'后面应接动名词或不定式，这里应为'to wear'而不是'wear'。

× My habit is wear one shoes until it broken and only it broken I can replace it buy a new one.

✓ My habit is to wear one pair of shoes until they are broken, and only when they are broken can I replace them by buying a new one.

'broken'是过去分词，表示状态，前面应加助动词'are'构成被动语态，表示鞋子被穿坏了。

× Yeah, actually my shoes are all about from the online website, especially in the top, a very popular website in China.

✓ Yeah, actually my shoes are all from online websites, especially the top, a very popular website in China.

'about from'用法错误，应该直接用'from'表示来源。'the online website'应改为'online websites'，因为是泛指网络网站。

× It's very convenient to buy from the online and and the price is very deep than in the store.

✓ It's very convenient to buy online and the price is much lower than in the store.

'buy from the online'应改为'buy online'，'deep'用来形容价格不合适，应改为'lower'表示价格更低。

× As for me, I think shoes is very important because you, I will wear it every day and for 12 or 15 hours a day.

✓ As for me, I think shoes are very important because I will wear them every day for 12 or 15 hours a day.

'shoes'是复数，谓语动词应用'are'，代词应用'them'而不是'it'。

× As for me, I think shoes is very important because you, I will wear it every day and for 12 or 15 hours a day.

✓ As for me, I think shoes are very important because I will wear them every day for 12 or 15 hours a day.

代词'it'指代复数名词'shoes'错误，应使用复数代词'them'。

× And if it not fit for my feet, it will feel very dis, uh, comfortable.

✓ And if it does not fit my feet, it will feel very uncomfortable.

'fit for'用法错误，正确用法是'fit'后直接接宾语，不用'for'。'dis comfortable'应合并为'uncomfortable'。

× And only it broken I can replace it buy a new one.

✓ And only when it is broken can I replace it by buying a new one.

句子中倒装结构需要加'when'引导时间状语，'can'用法正确，但句子结构需调整。

× After I had the babies I won't wear the fashion of shoes.

✓ After I had the babies, I won't wear fashionable shoes.

'the fashion of shoes'表达不正确，应使用形容词'fashionable'修饰'shoes'。

× After I had the babies I won't wear the fashion of shoes.

✓ After I had the babies, I won't wear fashionable shoes.

'fashion'是名词，不能直接修饰'shoes'，应使用形容词'fashionable'。

× You know the comfortable shoes can help me to run to chess my children.

✓ You know comfortable shoes can help me to run to chase my children.

'chess'拼写错误，应为'chase'，表示追赶。

× You know the comfortable shoes can help me to run to chess my children.

✓ You know comfortable shoes can help me run to chase my children.

'help me to run'中'help'后面动词不定式'to'可省略，且'run to chase'中'to'不应重复。