Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, such as 'I'm not actually been' and 'I don't usually when it's'. Try to use correct verb forms and structure your answer more clearly. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'so on'. Aim to give a direct response followed by a clear explanation using linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: I don't often buy shoes because I'm not a big fan of shopping. However, I usually purchase new shoes only when my old ones are worn out or broken.

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid vague phrases like 'quite an open thing' and 'and so on'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific examples to enrich your answer.

Exemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online. In my country, many people shop this way because there are large online marketplaces offering a wide variety of shoes, such as trainers and hiking boots.

Sugestão: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and filler words that affect clarity. Use correct sentence structures and avoid hesitation sounds like 'umm' and 'uh'. Also, try to link your ideas logically and be more precise with your vocabulary.

Exemplo: I usually spend about 5000 rubles on shoes. This amount varies because winter shoes tend to be more expensive than summer ones due to their materials and design.

Sugestão: Your answer is repetitive and contains many filler words, which reduce its effectiveness. Try to organise your response clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words like 'however' and 'for example'. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'some special automatic'.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes for activities like travelling because they provide support. However, for special occasions such as parties, I choose fashionable shoes to match the outfit.

× I'm not actually been a fan of going shopping

✓ I'm not actually a fan of going shopping

The sentence incorrectly uses 'been' with the present tense 'I'm'. The correct form is 'I'm not actually a fan', using the simple present tense to express a current state.

× I don't usually when it's, uh, really essential

✓ I don't usually buy shoes unless it's really essential

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb after 'usually'. Adding 'buy shoes unless' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× when it's really need to be

✓ when it's really needed

The phrase 'it's really need to be' is incorrect. The correct form is 'it's really needed' to express necessity in the present tense.

× when I have my previous shoes broken or so on

✓ when my previous shoes are broken or so on

The phrase 'have my previous shoes broken' is awkward. Using 'my previous shoes are broken' correctly uses plural agreement and passive voice to describe the condition.

× It's quite an open thing when people in my country buy shoes online

✓ It's quite common for people in my country to buy shoes online

The phrase 'an open thing' is incorrect. 'Quite common' is the appropriate expression to describe a frequent activity, and 'for people... to buy' is the correct infinitive structure.

× We have some big online markets where you can order whatever you want and any type of shoes

✓ We have some big online markets where you can order whatever you want, including any type of shoes

The original sentence lacks clarity. Adding 'including' improves the prepositional phrase and clarifies that any type of shoes can be ordered.

× Well, I guess nearly 5000 of rubles

✓ Well, I guess nearly 5000 rubles

The phrase '5000 of rubles' is incorrect. The correct form is '5000 rubles' without 'of' when expressing amounts of money.

× It's actually depends because umm, winter shoes usually require a higher price

✓ It actually depends because, umm, winter shoes usually require a higher price

The phrase 'It's actually depends' is incorrect. The correct form is 'It actually depends' without 'is' to agree with the subject.

× you of course need a comfortable shoes

✓ you of course need comfortable shoes

The phrase 'a comfortable shoes' mixes singular article 'a' with plural noun 'shoes'. Removing 'a' corrects the singular/plural agreement.

× then you will definitely need, uh, fashion one

✓ then you will definitely need, uh, a fashionable one

The word 'fashion' is a noun; the adjective form 'fashionable' is needed to describe 'one' (a shoe). Also, the article 'a' is required before 'fashionable one'.