Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more coherent and avoid redundancy. Also, correct minor errors like 'show' instead of 'shoe' and complete your sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy buying shoes because I look for both style and comfort. For instance, I prefer comfortable shoes that are also affordable. Additionally, I have a collection of shoes that I wear for different occasions.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be improved by correcting grammar and vocabulary errors, such as 'an good option' and 'show' instead of 'shoe'. Use linking words to make your points flow better.

Exemplo: No, I haven't bought shoes online because I prefer to feel the material and make sure they fit perfectly. Therefore, I find it difficult to buy shoes without trying them on first.

Sugestão: Good answer with clear details. To improve, avoid using informal words like 'bucks' and try to use linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly.

Exemplo: I usually spend a moderate amount on shoes. For special occasions, I might spend around 100 dollars, but for casual wear, I prefer more affordable options.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammar mistakes and hesitations. Try to speak more fluently and use linking words like 'however' or 'on the other hand' to contrast your preferences.

Exemplo: It depends on the occasion. For casual or workwear, I prefer comfortable and affordable shoes. However, for special events, I choose fashionable shoes even if they are less comfortable or more expensive.

× Basically I will look for the style and type of the show and meantime I will consider the price as well.

✓ Basically I will look for the style and type of the shoe and meantime I will consider the price as well.

The word 'show' is a misspelling of 'shoe'. This is a singular noun referring to footwear. Using 'show' is incorrect in this context and changes the meaning. Correct spelling is essential for clarity.

× So I prefer a comfortable shoe for a affordable price and also I have a collection of shoes which.

✓ So I prefer a comfortable shoe for an affordable price and also I have a collection of shoes.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'which' which is incomplete and causes sentence structure issues. Also, 'a affordable' is incorrect because 'affordable' starts with a vowel sound and requires 'an'. The sentence is corrected by removing 'which' and fixing the article.

× I don't think buying shoes is an good option for me.

✓ I don't think buying shoes is a good option for me.

The article 'an' is used before vowel sounds, but 'good' starts with a consonant sound 'g'. Therefore, the correct article is 'a'. This is a common article usage error.

× Basically I rather look for the comfort of the show and I found it quite difficult.

✓ Basically I rather look for the comfort of the shoe and I found it quite difficult.

Again, 'show' is a misspelling of 'shoe'. The singular noun 'shoe' is appropriate here. Correct spelling is necessary to convey the intended meaning.

× If it's a shoe for a special occasion or an event I will spend about 100 bucks, but if it's for a casual wear I will look for more affordable and cheap options.

✓ If it's a shoe for a special occasion or an event I will spend about 100 bucks, but if it's for casual wear I will look for more affordable and cheap options.

The phrase 'a casual wear' is incorrect because 'wear' is an uncountable noun here and does not take an article. Removing 'a' before 'casual wear' corrects the sentence.

× If it's for a casual or workwear, I will look for a comfortable shoe with for affordable price.

✓ If it's for casual or workwear, I will look for a comfortable shoe at an affordable price.

The phrase 'with for affordable price' is incorrect. The correct preposition to indicate price is 'at' and the article before 'affordable' should be 'an' because it starts with a vowel sound. Also, 'a casual or workwear' is incorrect; 'casual' should be an adjective modifying an uncountable noun 'workwear' without 'a'.

× But if it's for a uh occasion or an event, I will go for a fashionable one rather than looking for a comfort and the price.

✓ But if it's for an occasion or an event, I will go for a fashionable one rather than looking for comfort and price.

The filler 'uh' should be removed for clarity. 'A comfort' is incorrect because 'comfort' is an uncountable noun and does not take 'a'. Also, 'the price' is unnecessary here; 'price' without 'the' is more natural. The sentence is corrected accordingly.