Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 답변에서 'umm'과 같은 불필요한 말버릇을 줄이고, 문장을 더 자연스럽고 간결하게 구성하세요. 또한, 현재 시제와 과거 시제를 혼용하지 말고 일관되게 사용하며, 구체적인 이유나 경험을 덧붙여 답변을 풍부하게 만드세요.

Exemplo: I don't buy shoes very often because I'm not very interested in them. Usually, I buy new shoes once a year for special occasions. For example, last summer, I bought waterproof shoes to wear at the swimming pool.

Sugestão: 'umm' 같은 말버릇을 줄이고, 부정확한 표현('UN uncomfortable')을 고치세요. 또한, 'portal' 대신 'website'나 'online store' 같은 자연스러운 단어를 사용하고, 경험을 구체적으로 설명하여 답변을 명확하게 만드세요.

Exemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online before, but I don't like it because many times the shoes were uncomfortable and looked different from the pictures on the website. Therefore, I prefer to buy shoes in physical stores these days.

Sugestão: 문법 오류와 어색한 표현을 수정하고, 'uncomfortable shoes' 대신 'comfortable shoes'를 사용하세요. 또한, 답변을 더 명확하고 자연스럽게 만들기 위해 이유를 구체적으로 설명하세요.

Exemplo: I usually don't spend a lot of money on shoes. I spend less than $100 because I believe that amount is enough to buy comfortable and good-quality shoes.

Sugestão: 'umm'과 중복된 단어를 줄이고, 문장을 더 자연스럽고 명확하게 만드세요. 또한, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하고, 연결어를 사용하여 답변의 흐름을 개선하세요.

Exemplo: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because I have a backache. If I wear uncomfortable shoes, I feel pain all day. Therefore, I always choose wide-fit sneakers that provide good support.

× if I have a special event I bought the shoes once a year.

✓ if I have a special event I buy shoes once a year.

The sentence mixes present tense 'have' with past tense 'bought'. To maintain tense consistency, 'bought' should be changed to present tense 'buy' because the condition 'if I have' is present tense.

× in summer I bought uh, waterproof shoes to go to the swimming pool.

✓ in summer I buy uh, waterproof shoes to go to the swimming pool.

The sentence uses past tense 'bought' but the context suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'buy' is more appropriate.

× I failed a lot because it was UN uncomfortable and really different from the portal.

✓ I failed a lot because it was uncomfortable and really different from the website.

The prefix 'UN' should be lowercase and attached directly to the adjective 'comfortable' without a space. Also, 'portal' is less common; 'website' is clearer in this context.

× I do not spend a lot of money to buy shoes.

✓ I do not spend a lot of money buying shoes.

The verb 'spend' is usually followed by a gerund ('buying') rather than an infinitive ('to buy').

× I think it is enough to buy a uncomfortable shoes so.

✓ I think it is enough to buy uncomfortable shoes.

The article 'a' should be removed because 'shoes' is plural. Also, 'uncomfortable' is the correct adjective form without 'a' before plural noun.

× I think it is enough to buy a uncomfortable shoes so.

✓ I think it is enough to buy uncomfortable shoes.

The quantifier 'a' is incorrectly used before the plural noun 'shoes'. It should be omitted.

× I definitely I like to buy comfortable shoes.

✓ I definitely like to buy comfortable shoes.

The pronoun 'I' is unnecessarily repeated, causing redundancy.

× if I wear uncomfortable shoes then I I feel pain all day.

✓ if I wear uncomfortable shoes then I feel pain all day.

The pronoun 'I' is repeated twice, which is incorrect.