Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for better clarity. For example, instead of "I check the quality of them which I feel comfortable I buy them," you could say "I prefer to buy shoes in-store so I can check their quality and ensure they are comfortable."

Exemplo: Yes, I love buying shoes. Sometimes I browse online, but I usually prefer visiting physical stores like Nike so I can check the quality and comfort before buying.

Sugestão: Your answer repeats ideas and has some grammatical errors. Try to avoid repetition and use correct verb tenses. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, "Yes, I have bought many shoes online; however, I prefer offline stores because it is easier and more comfortable to check the quality and fit."

Exemplo: Yes, I have bought many shoes online; however, I prefer offline stores because it is easier and more comfortable to check the quality and see how they look on my feet.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use correct sentence structures. Also, avoid repeating phrases. For example, "The amount I spend on shoes depends on my budget. Sometimes I spend up to $150, but if I have less money, I choose more affordable options around $20 to $50."

Exemplo: The amount I spend on shoes depends on my budget. Sometimes I spend up to $150, but if I have less money, I choose more affordable options around $20 to $50.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more natural expressions and linking words. Also, correct minor grammar mistakes. For example, "I prefer both, depending on the situation. For parties, I choose fashionable shoes, but for work, I prefer comfortable ones because they help me work more efficiently."

Exemplo: I prefer both, depending on the situation. For parties, I choose fashionable shoes, but for work, I prefer comfortable ones because they help me work more efficiently.

× Sometimes I visit online websites for the shoes, but I prefer most of the time to visit offline stores like Nike stores.

✓ Sometimes I visit online websites for shoes, but most of the time I prefer to visit offline stores like Nike stores.

The preposition 'for' before 'the shoes' is unnecessary here. We say 'visit websites for shoes' less commonly than simply 'visit websites for shoes' or 'visit websites selling shoes'. Also, the phrase 'prefer most of the time to visit' is awkward; it is better to say 'most of the time I prefer to visit'. This improves sentence flow and clarity.

× I check the quality of them which I feel comfortable I buy them.

✓ I check their quality, and if I feel comfortable, I buy them.

The original sentence is a run-on and lacks proper conjunctions and punctuation. Adding 'and if' clarifies the condition under which the student buys the shoes. Also, 'the quality of them' is better expressed as 'their quality' for conciseness.

× Yes, I have bought many shoes from the online, but as I said, I prefer to bought from the offline stores.

✓ Yes, I have bought many shoes online, but as I said, I prefer to buy from offline stores.

The phrase 'from the online' is incorrect; 'online' does not require 'the' or 'from'. Also, 'prefer to bought' is incorrect because 'prefer' should be followed by the base form 'buy', not the past tense 'bought'.

× That makes me feel easier and comfortable and I can check the quality of the shoes, how good it is, how it is looking on my foot.

✓ That makes me feel more at ease and comfortable, and I can check the quality of the shoes, how good they are, and how they look on my foot.

The phrase 'feel easier' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'feel more at ease'. Also, 'how good it is' should agree in number with 'shoes' (plural), so 'how good they are' is correct. Similarly, 'how it is looking' should be 'how they look'.

× That's why I prefer to go offline stores.

✓ That's why I prefer to go to offline stores.

The verb 'go' requires the preposition 'to' before a place. Omitting 'to' before 'offline stores' is incorrect.

× Sometimes I bought $150.00 sometime I I don't have money and I'm I have low budget I go for comfortable suit like $20.30 dollars $50 It depends on my situation.

✓ Sometimes I spend $150.00; sometimes I don't have money, and when I have a low budget, I go for comfortable shoes like $20, $30, or $50. It depends on my situation.

The student mixed past tense 'bought' with present tense context. Since the question is about usual spending, present tense 'spend' is appropriate. Also, the sentence was fragmented and unclear; restructuring improves clarity. 'Comfortable suit' is likely a mistake for 'comfortable shoes'. Numbers should be separated by commas and expressed clearly.

× If I have to go on the parties I prefer fashionable shoes and if I had to go on the work I prefer comfortable shoes which makes my work easier and faster.

✓ If I have to go to parties, I prefer fashionable shoes, and if I have to go to work, I prefer comfortable shoes which make my work easier and faster.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect with 'parties' and 'work'; the correct preposition is 'to'. Also, 'if I had to go' mixes past tense with present context; 'if I have to go' is consistent. 'Shoes which makes' should be 'shoes which make' to agree in number.